My opportunities (1st part)
When I was a little girl, I used to think that I was able to be whoever I want, a doctor, an actress, an astronaut... I never thought about opportunities, money, racial discrimination, lucky or immigration. In my young mind, I believed that I was the same that everyone, but soon I realized that it wasn't true.
In 1999, Hugo Chavez won president's election. I remember to see that day for the first time fireworks through my parent's bedroom's window. One year later my parents separated, after what was for me the World War III.
My adolescence's years happened very fast between, my parents' fights, political problems, lack of money, sex, death, violence and a crazy family. All of the sudden, one day I was sitting in front of a psychiatrist asking for help. When I recover, I needed to finish the university and found a new job because the food was less and less every day in my house.
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My Opportunities (1st part) (Capitalize your titles! It makes your work look as if you were writing the front page headlines of for a national newspaper. It works, try it!)
When I was a little girl, I used to think that I was able to be whoever I want, a doctor, an actress, an astronaut... I never thought about opportunities, money, racial discrimination, luck or immigration. In my young mind, I believed that I was the same as everyone, but soon I realized that it wasn't true.
In 1999, Hugo Chavez won the presidential election. I remember seeing fireworks that day for the first time through my parent's bedroom's window. One year later my parents separated, after what was for me the was World War III.
My adolescence years happened very quickly between my parents' fights, political problems, lack of money, sex, death, violence and a crazy family. All of a sudden, one day I was sitting in front of a psychiatrist asking for help. When I recover, I needed to finish the university and find a new job because the food was less and less every day in my house.
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My opportunities (1st part)
When I was a little girl, I used to think that I [was able to be]/could become [whoever]/whatever I wanted, : a doctor, an actress, an astronaut... I never thought about opportunities, money, racial discrimination, lucky or immigration. In my young mind, I believed that I was the same that as everyone else, but [soon] I soon realized that it wasn't true.In 1999, Hugo Chavez won [president's] the election for president. I remember that day to seeing [that day] fireworks for the first time [fireworks] through my parent's' bedroom's window. One year later my parents separated, after what was for me the third World War /World War III.
My adolescentce's years happened very fast between, my parents' fights, political problems, lack of money, sex, death, violence and a crazy family. All of the a sudden, one day I was sitting in front of a psychiatrist asking for help. When I recovered, I needed to finish the at university, and [found a new]/find a job because [the food] there was less and less food every/each day [in my house]/at home.
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