Could you please check my sentences?
A few months ago I attended a 書道 course, so I would like to write something nice for one of my friends. This is the sentence I would like to write on a postcard:
友達は人の欠点知っても，やはりその人が好きだよ!
I wanted to say something like this: even if a friend knows your weaknesses, he still likes you.
Could you tell me if there is any mistake? Is the meaning clear?
I wait for your kind help!
Alessandra
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友達は人の欠点知っても，やはりその人が好きだよ!
I wanted to say something like this: even if a friend knows your weaknesses, he still likes you.友達が、その人の欠点を知っていたとしても、それでもその人が好きなままだよ。
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例え友達があなたの欠点を知っていたとしても、友達はあなたを好きなままだよ。
as you know,these sentence are same meanings.
Hi,Alessandra
your japanese sentence is almost correct.please don't care about it.I could understand what you want to say.your japanese is great!
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助けてくれてどもありがとうございました。
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If you translated your English words into Japanese, you can get「もしあなたの欠点が目についても、彼はあなたを好きなままだよ。」. But this Japanese phrase don't touch my heart, so I think it is better for you to use「もしあなたの欠点が目についても、彼はあなたを嫌いにならないよ。」, however your original one is changed a bit.
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Could you please check my sentences?
A few months ago I attended a 書道 course, so I would like to write something nice for one of my friends. This is the sentence I would like to write on a postcard:*** Your version is tool literal translation and would not really fit into the natural Japanese expressions:
真の友(達)とは／本当の親友とは
相手の欠点が見えても／分かっても（嫌いにならないで）
いつまでも好きで／一緒にいてくれる（人だ／人間だ）!
I wanted to say something like this: even if a friend knows your weaknesses, he still likes you.
Could you tell me if there is any mistake? Is the meaning clear?
I wait for your kind help!
Alessandra
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