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To be a parent Topic: Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? There is no doubt that to be a parent is one of the challenging jobs in the world. In order to accomplish this role, some parents choose to enroll a parenting class before baby born. Therefore, it is true that a training course prepare a solid foundation for couples to get ready for the next stage of life. There are two following reasons that outline my points. One reason is that course allows you to make mistakes but the real world doesn’t. For examples, Some parenting courses are conducted by professionals who can teach you a variety of parenting skills and how to deal with the challenges. As a student, you can learn by doing durning the courses. Furthermore, you have opportunities to ask questions if you encounter any challenges. And it doesn’t as easy as a learner if you officially become parent. Other reason is that the course gives you a transition before you become a parent. As an adult, we have many roles in one time such as husband, wife, employees, or family’s member. It means that our time is limited. As the result ,we won’t have enough time to commit a course after we encounter the difficulties. In conclusion, the parenting course have a variety of benefits that prepare you become a good mom and dad. It is not only teach you caring skills but also prepare your mindset of new role. It seems to me very essential to have this learnings if I become other’s parent in the future.

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It will not only teach you caring skills To be a parent

Topic: Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There is no doubt that to be a parent is one of the challenging jobs in the world. In order to accomplish this role, some parents choose to enroll a parenting class before the baby is born. Therefore, it is true that a training course prepare a solid foundation for couples to get ready for the next stage of life. There are two following reasons that outline my points.

One reason is that course allows you to make mistakes but the real world doesn’t. For examples, some parenting courses are conducted by professionals who can teach you a variety of parenting skills and how to deal with the challenges. As a student, you can learn by doing durning the courses. Furthermore, you have opportunities to ask questions if you encounter any challenges. And it doesn’t as easy as a learner if you officially become parent.(can you clarify what you are trying to say here?)

Another reason is that the course gives you a transition before you become a parent. As an adult, we have many roles in life in one time such as husband, wife, employees, or a family member. This means that our time is limited. As the result ,we won’t have enough time to commit to taking a course after we encounter the difficulties.

In conclusion, the parenting course have a variety of benefits that prepare you become a good mom and dad. It will not only teach you caring skills but also prepare your mindset to this new role. It seems to me very essential to have this education if I become a parent in the future.

BTW Excellent job! You have a great grasp of English.  My small changes are just to make your notebook "sound" more correct.  YOu had a sentence of "It is not only teach you caring skills".  Only use is in the present tense. or something you are doing right now.  If you were taking the course now you would say "it is teaching me caring skills".



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I agree with you.I' a mom now.

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