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We Have a Unable Child at Home! (I appreciate any corrections here) Few newborn infants are not physically and mentally healthy and have a disability. The birth of a child with disabilities can change the family in a variety of ways. Parents and siblings are likely to reaction(respond) with despair, anger, depression, feelings of guilt and confusion because the child with physical, mental and behavioral disabilities, creates unique challenges for the family. Siblings have many kinds of worries after they realize that a new born baby has a disability. There are always questions in their minds. Why is this happening to us? Is his illness contagious or epidemic? What can I tell to my friends? Do I have to take care of him all my life? Will I have disabling children? And like that. The best way to help their siblings is to protect their parents and their families. Participating siblings in group therapy programs allows them to exchange information with others about their inability to siblings, express their feelings and learn how to effectively deal with their disabling sister or brother. I wish everyone to be healthy:)

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We Have a disabled Unable child at home! (I would appreciate any corrections here)

Few newborn infants are not physically and mentally healthy and have a disability. The birth of a child with disabilities can change the family in a variety of ways.
Parents and siblings are likely to reaction(respond) with despair, anger, depression, feelings of guilt and confusion because the child with physical, mental and behavioral disabilities, creates unique challenges for the family. Siblings have many kinds of worries after they realize that a new born baby has a disability. There are always questions in their minds. Why is this happening to us? Is his illness contagious or epidemic? What can I say tell to my friends? Do I have to take care of him for the rest of  all my life? Will I have disabled disabling children? And so on like that.
The best way to help their siblings is to protect their parents and their families. Participating siblings in group therapy programs allows them to exchange information with others about their sibling's inability to siblings, express their feelings and learn how to effectively deal with their disabled disabling sister or brother.
I wish everyone to be healthy:)
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We Have ^ a Disabled Unable Child at Home! (I would appreciate any corrections here)

Few newborn infants are not physically and or mentally disabled healthy and have a disability. The birth of a child with disabilities can change * a  the family in a variety of ways.

Parents and siblings are likely to reaction(respond) with have feelings of despair, anger, depression, feelings of guilt and confusion because the * a child with physical, mental and behavioral disabilities creates unique challenges for the family. Siblings have many kinds of worries after they realize that a newborn baby has a disability. There are always questions in on their minds: Why is this happening to us? Is his illness contagious or epidemic? What can I tell to my friends? Do I have to take care of him all my life? Will I also have disabled disabling children? And the list of questions goes on. like that.


The best way to help these siblings is to protect their parents and their families. Participating Siblings can participate in group therapy programs where they can allows them to exchange information with others facing the same predicament, express their feelings and learn how to effectively deal with their disabled disabling sister or brother.


I wish everyone will to be healthy:)

Hi Samaneh, 

* I changed some of your articles from "the" to "a". Writers use "the" when both writer and reader have a common understanding of the specific noun being used. In your sentences, you are not referring to a specific child or family; instead, you are writing a general truth (i.e. The birth of a child with disabilities can change a family in a variety of ways.)

^ Over here, I used "a" despite knowing that you are describing a specific child. This is because you are mentioning the noun for the first time.

Example: We have a problem with the aircraft (introducing the specific noun for the first time). The problem seems to be connected to the auxiliary power unit.  (mentioning the specific noun again)

I hope this helps you. 

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We Have a Unable Child at Home! (I appreciate any corrections here)

A few newborn infants are not physically and mentally healthy and have a disability. The birth of a child with disabilities can change the family in a variety of ways.
Parents and siblings are likely to react (respond) with despair, anger, depression, feelings of guilt and confusion because the child with physical, mental and behavioral disabilities which creates unique challenges for the family. Siblings have many kinds of worries after they realize that a new born baby has a disability. There are always questions in their minds. Why is this happening to us? Is his illness contagious or is this a epidemic? What can I tell to my friends? Do I have to take care of him all my life? Will I have disabled children? And so on.
The best way to help their siblings is to protect their parents and their families. Siblings that participate in group therapy programs allows them to exchange information with others about their inability to relate to siblings, express their feelings and learn how to effectively deal with their disabled sister or brother.
I wish everyone to be healthy:)

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