Tangled
I have a girl friend and we have known each other for nearly three years. It was in December 2016 that we first met in a hospital where both of us were hospitalized because of the same disease. As the only two young patients in the ward, we became close friends. In spite of the pain of disease, she was always cheerful and encouraged me to be positive. Her hometown is in the northeast of China. In pursuit of her dream, she left home and got into a college and now she is a doctor of letters. The most surprising thing about her is that she has the longest hair that I have ever seen, in my opinion, as long as two meters long. So I often call her Miss Tangled. Recently, something happened on Miss Tangled. As she is going to graduate from school, Miss Tangled is busy looking for a apartment. However, it is the hottest time of a year. Being a beauty girl, to avoid sunburn, she wear clothes with long sleeves, a big hat on her head, a mask on her face and together with a umbrella in one hand. She just looked like a soldier coming from the ancient myth. Though these equipment were effectively helpful to stop the sunburn, meanwhile, they were really difficult for her to clearly see roads. At a construction site, distracted by a passing car, she accidentally dropped into a deep hole. Fortunately, she was miraculously unhurt except for a little nervous. On the way back to school, she was still cheerful and happily told me about her experience.
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