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My holiday
My parents and I often spend our holidays in Spain, and I could well imagine living there for a while. Spanish people are very friendly, and the weather there seems to be nice all the time.In general, I think it is good to go abroad for a couple of years. I would like to work in a holiday resort as a waiter or events organiser*, so that after work I could spend the rest of the day as if I were on holiday too.
On the other hand, I think that after living abroad for a while it would** not be that exciting any more. Therefore I do not want to live there forever, only for a few years. Then I would come back to my home town***. I like my home town a lot, and I have my family and friends here. It would be a pity if we lost contact.
This is mostly very good, after the title !
* an animator, often, means someone who creates moving images, cartoons. It is also used to mean someone who inspires events, which is what I think you mean here. In that case, it might be better to go with events organiser, or holiday rep (short for representative), or something similar.
** probably better to use would here rather than will, after the "think" verb. But not necesary.
*** We don't combine words quite so freely in English as you may be used to, though many word pairs over time drift from two words to a hyphenated pair to a single word. At present "hometown" is really more US English than British English. But you might not mind that!
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/animator
https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/animator
https://study.com/academy/lesson/using-verbs-in-the-conditional-and-subjunctive-moods.html
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/punctuation/comma
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/spelling/one-word-or-two
My hollyday holiday
My parents and I often spend our holidays in Spain and I could well imagine living there for a while. Spanish people are very friendly and the weather there seems to be nice all the time.
In general, I think it is good to go abroad for a couple of years. I would like to work in a holiday resort as a waiter or animator. So after work, I could spend the rest of the day as if I were on holiday, too.
On the other hand I think that after living abroad for a while it will not be that exciting anymore. Therefore I do not want to live there forever, only for a few years. Then I would come back to my hometown. I like my hometown a lot and I have my family and friends here. It would be a pity if we lost contact.
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