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more tourists visit place conditions are difficult, Sahara desert or Antarctic. benefit disadvantage Recently a considerable increase in number of tourist has been recorded who are interested to explore remote areas such as Sahara desert and the Antarctic. This essay will discuss the newness of such area as a benefit for tourists to avoid visiting similar views or option and then will explain the natural risks of aforementioned places as a main drawback. An essential objective for most of tourists is to visit new places, while most of attractive areas and countries offer similar excursions such as wonderful beaches, amazing wildlife and so forth. But people do not take long and expensive trips to visit always the same things in different corners of the world and therefore they will start to change their taste and think about visiting new locations with different kind of excursions, which will satisfy them by other type of excitement. For example, the tourist department of African Union, based on statistics of last 3 years has reported more than 48% in quantity of foreign tourists who are visiting deserts of Africa and mainly Sahara desert, has increased. On the other hand, when visitors travel to remote locations, which are unknown for them, there is always potential risks. As a result, local authorities have noticed so frequently about danger of wild animals or snakes and the most excruciating one, getting lost. For instance, local rescue office of Perth in Australia, has declared that in average, each year about 25% of tourists has been lost and rescue them had been contacted to perform the search and saving operation. In conclusion, in last years, the taste of tourists has been changed and they look more interested to visit areas with hard conditions. The main advantage of such areas such as Antarctic is their different attractions and beauty, nevertheless, there is always dangers and for such a remote place, above all else, getting lost could be considered the most risky possibility.

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more tourists visit place conditions are difficult, Sahara desert or Antarctic. benefit disadvantage

Recently a considerable increase in the number of tourists has been recorded, who are interested in exploring remote areas such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic. This essay will discuss the newness of such area as a benefit for tourists to avoid visiting similar views or option and then will explain the natural risks of aforementioned places as a main drawback.
An essential objective for most of tourists is to visit new places, while most of attractive areas and countries offer similar excursions such as wonderful beaches, amazing wildlife and so forth. But people do not take long and expensive trips to visit always the same things in different corners of the world and therefore they will start to change their taste and think about visiting new locations with different kind of excursions, which will satisfy them by other type of excitement. For example, the tourist department of African Union, based on statistics of last 3 years has reported more than 48% in quantity of foreign tourists who are visiting deserts of Africa and mainly Sahara desert, has increased.
On the other hand, when visitors travel to remote locations, which are unknown for them, there is always potential risks. As a result, local authorities have noticed so frequently about danger of wild animals or snakes and the most excruciating one, getting lost. For instance, local rescue office of Perth in Australia, has declared that in average, each year about 25% of tourists has been lost and rescue them had been contacted to perform the search and saving operation.
In conclusion, in last years, the taste of tourists has been changed and they look more interested to visit areas with hard conditions. The main advantage of such areas such as Antarctic is their different attractions and beauty, nevertheless, there is always dangers and for such a remote place, above all else, getting lost could be considered the most risky possibility.
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