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‘Should shops be allowed to sell food that is bad for your health?’ It turns out to be clear food we eat is relevant in order to keep an healthy lifestyle. However, are shops help us to get good food? Some experts have shown most shops sell food which cointains either too much sugar or some harmful ingredient. They claim to pay attention to the recipe. On the one hand, if a product is highly unhealthy. Goverments of each country must not only rid its advertisement on tv but they also forbid its existance, On the other hand, people should be informed about food they consume. It is supposed we all should look up information about what product drive us to be healthy and what ones do not. To conclude, unfortunately we will continue having this kind of bad food in our society . However if we help each other warning us in order to prevent eating bad food we will avoid to go these shops.

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‘Should shops be allowed to sell food that is bad for your health?’

It turns out to be clear, the food we eat is extremely relevant to our diets in order to keep a healthy lifestyle. However, are shops helping us to get good food?

Some experts have shown that most shops sell food which contains either too much sugar or some other harmful ingredients, however, they claim to pay attention to the recipe.

On the one hand, if a product is highly unhealthy, governments of each country must not only get rid of it's advertisement on tv but they also forbid its existence,

On the other hand, people should be informed about the food they consume. It is assumed that we all should look up information about what products enable us to be healthy and which ones do not.

To conclude, unfortunately, we will continue to have this kind of bad food in our society. However, if we inform each other to prevent eating bad food, we will avoid going to these shops.


Hope this helps Alberto, any questions please ask.



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‘Should shops be allowed to sell food that is bad for your health?’

It turns out to be is clear that the food we eat is relevant necessary in order to keep an live a healthy lifestyle. However, are shops helping us to get find good food?

Some experts have shown most shops sell food which cointains either too much sugar or some harmful ingredient. They claim to pay attention to the recipe.

On the one hand, if a product is highly unhealthy, Goverments governments of each country must not only rid ban its advertisement on tv but they must/should also forbid its existance existence/manufacture.

On the other hand, people should be informed about the food they consume. It is supposed  We should all should look up information about on what products drive help us to be healthy and which ones do not.

To conclude, unfortunately we will continue having this kind of bad unhealthy food in our society. However, if we help warn each other warning us in order to prevent about eating bad food we will avoid to go going to these shops.

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