Sadness of June
In this July, Osaka was hit by earthquake. I lived in Osaka, at the north side, 4 months ago. Japan has many earthquake because of several borders of crustal plates and we often hear the news even if an earthquake was small size. Then, at first, when I checked it on web site, I didn't know whether it was small size or not, and disastrous or not. I emailed ex-colleagues in Osaka, and he told me that our workplace was suffer from being flooded because the water tank on the top roof was broken. In addition, I got several information about this disaster. I was sorry about it. I hope it will be fine as soon as possible.
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Sadness of June
In This June,* Osaka was hit by earthquake. I lived in Osaka, at on the north side, 4 four** months ago. Japan has many earthquakes because of several borders of crustal plates and we often hear about them on the news even if an earthquake was small in size. When, at first, when I checked it on the web site, I didn't know whether it was small sized or not, and disastrous or not. I emailed ex-colleagues in Osaka, and they*** told me that our workplace was had suffered from being flooded**** because the water tank on the top of the roof was broken {better: broke}. In addition, I got received several pieces of information about this disaster. I was sorry about it. I hope it will be fine as soon as possible.*The earthquake happened on June 18.
**Numbers up to ten are written out.
***Or: "I emailed an ex-colleague and he..."
****Better: sustained flood damage, suffered from
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