July 2nd, 2018 My Dear Diary

My Dear Diary

Today I translated a poem written by myself.

But I found it was really difficult to find the most appropriate words, and I don't know how to make it more easier and smoother.

I will be grateful if you can point the errors out to me.

Any suggestions would be appreciate.

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Nothing Left

不剩

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I felt like I was eaten by someone

我感觉我就要被什么东西吃掉了

With every last one of my bones

连骨头都不剩下

I wish I could ask what's does I taste like

真想问问它我是什么味道的

Wanna know if there was a chance or not

不知道还有没有机会

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The first thing I lost was my ears

我最先失去的是我的耳朵

I couldn't hear her voice at once

忽然就听不见它

Of course, and any sounds of chewing

当然也听不见任何咀嚼的声音

Then she swallowed my eyes

随即它又咽下我的眼睛，

Suddenly, it all turned to completely dark

忽然就一片漆黑

I knew I would never see her anymore

我知道我再也看不到它了

Finally I stopped struggling

最后我不再挣扎

Just letting her taste my flesh and blood in silence

不声不响地任它啖着我的骨肉

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She was a kindhearted devourer

它是个心地善良

It was even a little bit melancholy

甚至有些忧郁的吞噬者

She choked, tears silently

它哽咽它默默号泣

She feared the pain

它害怕痛

She said, couldn't be like this for long

它说不愿再这样下去

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