The day at the beach (correct if is wrong)
Yesterday I went to the beach. It was a fantastic day. I met my sweetness cousin that I love. I love the way in which she treats me, is so kind. After the beach we went to dinner and we ate a lot of fish. It was so delicious.
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The day at the beach (correct if is wrong)
Yesterday I went to the beach. It was a fantastic day. I met my sweetness sweetest cousin that whom I love. I love the way in which she treats me. She is so kind. After the beach we went out to dinner and we ate a lot of fish. It was so delicious.2
The day at the beach (correct if is wrong)
Yesterday I went to the beach. It was a fantastic day. I met my sweetness cousin that I love. I love the way in which she treats me, is so kind. (I love the way she treats me so kindly OR I love that she is so kind to me) After the beach we went to dinner and we ate a lot of fish. It was so delicious.1
The day at the beach (correct if is wrong)
Yesterday I went to the beach. It was a fantastic day. I met my sweetness cousin that I love. I love the way in which she treats me, it's so kind. After the beach we went to dinner and we ate a lot of fish. It was so delicious.0
we went for dinner not to dinner
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Great! And sounds like a lovely day with your cousin. :)
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