Yesterday, I tried the scuba diving with my friends in Izu. It was so exciting because there were many fishes in the sea. This is just like Disney's Little Mermaid! I had never seen such a clear sea in my life, so it was a valuable experience for me. I also saw a real drone for the first time. A friend brought it, and used it to take some pictures. The pictures taken with the drone are like the opening of a movie!

If there is a mistake, please let me know!

It looks great! Keep up the good work![emoji][emoji] (By the way, some of the changes I made were just to make it sound more natural.)

2018.06.30

Yesterday, I tried the scuba diving with my friends in Izu. It was so exciting because there were many fishes in the sea. It felt like being in Disney's Little Mermaid! I had never been in open sea water so it was a valuable experience to me. I also saw a real drone for the first time. A friend brought it with him/her, and took pictures The pictures taken from the drone which reminded me of the opening of a movie!

If there is a mistake, please let me know!

2018.06.30

Yesterday, I tried the scuba diving with my friends in Izu. It was so exciting because there were many fishes in the sea. It's like Disney's Little Mermaid! I had never seen clear sea in my life so I t was a valuable experience for me. And I saw a real drone for the first time. A friend brought it, and took a picture using this. The pictures taken from the drone is like an opening of a movie!

If there is a mistake, please let me know!