Ivy the cat
Last year I adopted a kitten. Her name is Ivy (Like poison Ivy). She lived in a animal shelter. She is very beautiful and her fur is white, brown and black. Her eyes are like a "dragon" and very green. Her tail is broken, maybe for a street fight.
She loves to complain, she bites my clothes, she has a strong-minded and sometimes is so difficult for me. But then, she "talk" to me or she look for my attention or affection, and I forget bad things.
Actually, I love her so much and I know her loves me too.
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Ivy the cat
Last year I adopted a kitten. Her name is Ivy (Like poison Ivy). She lived (to express that she doesn't live there any more, you might say 'She used to live...') in a animal shelter. She is very beautiful and her fur is white, brown and black. Her eyes are like a "dragon" and very green. Her tail is broken, maybe for because of a street fight.She loves to complain, she bites my clothes, she has a is strong-minded and sometimes it is so (or 'very') difficult for me. But then, she "talks" to me or she looks for my attention or affection, and I forget about bad things.
Actually, I love her so much and I know her she loves me too.
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Ivy the cat
Last year I adopted a kitten. Her name is Ivy (Like poison Ivy). She lived in an animal shelter. She is very beautiful and her fur is white, brown and black. Her eyes are "dragon - like" and very green. Her tail is broken, maybe from a street fight.She loves to complain, she bites my clothes, and is so strong-minded that sometimes I find her difficult. But then, she "talks" to me or she seeks my attention or affection, and I forget her wrongdoings!
Actually, I love her so much and I know she loves me too.
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Last year I adopted a kitten. Her name is Ivy (Like poison Ivy). She lived in an animal shelter. She is very beautiful and her fur is white, brown and black. Her eyes are like"dragon 's eye " and very green. Her tail is broken, maybe because of a street fight.
She loves to complain, she bites my clothes, she has a strong-minde that is sometimes so difficult. But then, she "talks" to me or she looks for my attention or affection, and I forget bad things.
Actually, I love her so much and I know her loves me too.
She loves to complain, she bites my clothes, she has a strong-minde that is sometimes so difficult. But then, she "talks" to me or she looks for my attention or affection, and I forget bad things.
Actually, I love her so much and I know her loves me too.
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Nice composition, Lidia. Pay attention to the subject in a sentence, some languages may not use them in every sentence, but in English they're always explicit. I've added some alternatives in case you'd like to use varied language.
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