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6月28日的日记 6月28日 云有时大雨 昨天天气不好,下大雨,刮大风。还有非常闷热,所以我打开空调了。天气预报说快要出梅了。 出梅后就是夏天!其实我不太喜欢夏天。因为是最近日本的夏天的天气热死了!我最喜欢的季节是秋天。秋天有很多好吃的水果,气候很舒服,还有对运y动和旅行最好。我盼望秋天!!! Could you someone correct following English version, please? ↓ It was heavy rain and heavy wind. Also it was so humid. So I turned on the air conditioner for the first time this year! The weather report said that the rainy season will be almost over. Summer is just around the corner! But actually, I don't really like summer, because Japanese summer is too hot nowadays. It's so dangerous for our health. I like autumn the best. Because we can eat many kinds of good fruits, the weather is so comfortable and I think it's the best season for sports and traveling. I'm looking forward aututmn!

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6月28日的日记

6月28日 (多)云有时大雨

昨天天气不好,下大雨,刮大风。而且还有非常闷热,所以我打开了空调了。天气预报说快要出梅了。
出梅后就是夏天!其实我不太喜欢夏天。因为是最近日本的夏天(真)的天气热死了!我最喜欢的季节是秋天。秋天有很多好吃的水果,气候很舒服,(最適合)还有对运动和旅行最好。我盼望秋天(的到來)!!!
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6月28日的日记

6月28日 云有时大雨

昨天天气不好,下大雨,刮大风。还有非常闷热(潮湿),所以我打开空调了。天气预报说(雨季快要结束)快要出梅了。
出梅(雨季)后就是夏天!其实我不太喜欢夏天。因为是最近日本的夏天的天气热死+人了!我最喜欢的季节是秋天。秋天有很多好吃的水果,气候很舒服,还有对适合运y动和旅行最好。我盼望秋天(的到来/来临)!!!

Could you someone correct following English version, please?
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It was heavy rain and heavy wind. Also it was so humid. So I turned on the air conditioner for the first time this year!
The weather report said that the rainy season will be almost over. Summer is just around the corner!
But actually, I don't really like summer, because Japanese summer is too hot nowadays. It's so dangerous for our health.
I like autumn the best. Because we can eat many kinds of good fruits, the weather is so comfortable and I think it's the best season for sports and traveling. I'm looking forward aututmn!

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