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The Thirty-Eighth Subject: The Dangers of Unveilings of inspiration I will be thankful if someone corrects my translation, all factors. Unveilings of inspiration have dangers and blights and a mystical traveler has to know them in order to be release from his ego's temptation. We will mention here some of them: A) Being difficult to realize the right unveiling from wrong one. B) These unveilings of inspiration will hold a mystical traveler back from the right journey and it causes he will be busy by them instead of passing the path of trust in God and monothism. The reason of these declarations is that some of masters used to prevent their disciples from noticing to these affairs, even sometimes they prevented the state of unveiling from them by holding sway. C) Some of unveilings of inspiration are not the same with realities and Islamic Divine Law. D) Unveiling is a kind of intrusion and influence in the order of universe and the appearance of the nature. E) Unveiling causes superiority complex; a mystical traveler will also arrogate something that he does not have it, such as it happened for (( Mohammad Ali Báb )) who was a religion student of the seminary of Najaf that futitle and fictitious religion of Bahiat originated from him. F) Unveiling is not reality but it is from the imaginal world (intemediate suprusesory world), thus it does not happen by perfect men. I also did not observe like these unveilings of inspiration from my master that some are proud of them. G) A mystical traveler who is dedicated to divine love and right mysticism will not notice to such affairs and if he observe something, he will tell his master while he is unwilling to that; because he fears falling down in the place of destruction of ego. H) Such unveilings of inspiration is also seen from who are not saints of God; therefore, having unveiling is not virtue nor privilege. I) Unveiling will causes a mystical traveler be away from the world of nearness to God and mystical knowledge and it will result superiority complex and arrogance inside him. And the mystical traveler in this state instead of dedicating to general and destination will be busy by limits. J) Unveilings of inspiration are self-manifestations and there is no remedy except being treated by a master. K) Briefly speaking, monotheist reflection and contemplating in the inner luminosty does not give moment to a mystical traveler that thinks to unveilings of inspiration. A mystical traveler has to complete his time in the way that will be no free time for other affairs.

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4) So, is it correct if I say? : And the mystical traveler in this state instead of dedicating to general and destination will be distracted by inconsequential pursuits
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2) As you see I used some times "unveilings of inspiration" that is a phrase consists two words I got from a translation book, why just for one place you mentioned I use "by" instead? these unveilings (of) by inspiration from my master 3) In the sentence can I wanted to say while he is unwilling to unveiling. not unwilling to tell to his master, so how can I say: ... if he observes something, while he is unwilling to happening of that, he will tell his master; because he fears falling down in the place of destruction of ego.
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Thank you very much for your correction and time that you spent for it. I wish may God bless you. I have a few questions. 1) Using"the reason for these declarations" I meant the reason for these "sayings". I wanted to choose a formal word. Please let me know which word I have to use here?
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Sorry for the untidy format of corrections in the comments section. I was unable to submit a correction for some reason. The parts in parentheses are deleted words and phrases. Unfortunately I put my additions in highlight, but they also don’t show up here. Hope you are still able to decipher through it in this format!
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E) Unveiling causes superiority complex; a mystical traveler will also arrogate something that he does not have (it), such as it happened for (( Mohammad Ali Báb )) who was a religion student of the seminary of Najaf the (that) futitle and fictitious religion of Bahiat originated from him. F) Unveiling is not reality, but it is from the imaginal world (intemediate suprusesory world), thus it does not happen by perfect men. I also did not observe (like) these unveilings (of) by inspiration from my master that some are proud of them (Unclear what them refers to). G) A mystical traveler who is dedicated to divine love and right mysticism will not notice (to) such affairs and if he observes something, he will tell his master while (he is) being unwilling to do that; because he fears falling down in the place of destruction of ego. H) Such unveilings of inspiration (is) are also seen from those who are not saints of God; therefore, having an unveiling is not virtue nor privilege. I) Unveiling will causes a mystical traveler be away from the world of nearness to God and mystical knowledge and it will result superiority complex and arrogance inside him. And the mystical traveler in this state instead of dedicating to general and destination will be busy by limits. (Unclear what busy by limits means in this context, maybe “busy within his limits” meaning distracted by inconsequential pursuits) J) Unveilings of inspiration are self-manifestations and there is no remedy except being treated by a master. K) Briefly speaking, monotheist reflection and contemplating in the inner luminosty does not give moment to a mystical traveler (that thinks to) to put his thoughts to unveilings of inspiration. A mystical traveler has to complete his time in (the) a way that will (be) leave no free time for other affairs. Let me know if you have any questions. Good luck with you studies.

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