IELTS speaking test - Work or study
Hi, I am preparing my IELTS test. Here is one of my speakings. It will be assessed based on fluency and coherence, lexical resource, grammatical range and accuracy, and pronunciation.
Would you mind helping me to check my writing? Please kindly let me know if there is still room for improvement.
Thank you in advance!
Part 1:
1)Do you work or are you a student?
Before I came to Hainan I was working as an executive assistant for senior management in an international company.
But at this moment, I am preparing my IETLS because I hope to do a Master abroad.
2)Why did you choose to do that type of work for?
My career path is from an assistant to operation manage to head of operation department. You can learn a lots from your hiring manager, such as leadership skill, communication skill, presentation skill and so on. especially as if your hiring manage is one of exco members.
3) Do you like your job? why/why not?
Yes, I love my job because it's interesting and challenging enough. Moreover, I work with a great team from APAC.
4) What is the best thing about your job?
I led 2017-2018 corporate English training program for over 100,000 associates in China. Before my takeover, this program was only covered 20 associates in Home office.
5) Do you prefer working alone or with others? Why?
I prefer to work as a part of a team. I am a team player with excellent interface skill, but also can work independently to drive for targeted results.
6) Do you miss being student?
Yes. Actually, I am preparing my master this year, and would like to apply for 2019 intake of MBA course.
7) What subjects are you going to study?
I am going to apply for MBA, specializing in Global business.
Because all businesses in the world now are become globally nowadays. It require that the leaders to have professional global business knowledge.
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IELTS speaking test - Work or study
Hi, I am preparing for my IELTS test. Here is one of my answers speakings. It will be assessed based on fluency and coherence, lexical resource, grammatical range, and accuracy, and pronunciation.Would you mind helping me to check my writing? Please kindly let me know if there is still room for improvement.
Thank you in advance!
Part 1:
1)Do you work or are you a student?
Before I came to Hainan I was working as an executive assistant for senior management in an international company.
But at this moment, I am preparing for my IETLS because I hope to do a Masters abroad.
2)Why did you choose to do that type of work for?
My career path is from an assistant to operation manager to head of operation department. You can learn a lots from your hiring manager, such as leadership skill, communication skill, presentation skill and so on. Eespecially as if your hiring manage is one of exco members.
3) Do you like your job? Why/why not?
Yes, I love my job because it's interesting and challenging enough. Moreover, I work with a great team from APAC.
4) What is the best thing about your job?
I led 2017-2018 a corporate English training program for over 100,000 associates in China. Before my takeover, this program was only covered 20 associates in Home office.
5) Do you prefer working alone or with others? Why?
I prefer to work as a part of a team. I am a team player with excellent interface [it might be better to use the word communication instead of interface here] skills, but also can work independently to drive for targeted results.
6) Do you miss being student?
Yes. Actually, I am preparing my masters this year, and would like to apply for the 2019 intake of an MBA course.
7) What subjects are you going to study?
I am going to apply for an MBA, specializing in Global business.
Because all businesses in the world now are become globally nowadays. , Iit requires that the leaders to have professional global business knowledge.
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IELTS speaking test - Work or study
Hi, I am preparing to take my IELTS test. Here is one of my spoken exercises. It will be assessed based on fluency and coherence, lexical resource, grammatical range and accuracy, and pronunciation.Would you mind helping me to check my writing? Please kindly let me know if there is still room for improvement.
Thank you in advance!
Part 1:
1) Do you work or are you a student?
Before I came to Hainan I was working as an executive assistant for senior management in an international company.
But Currently, I am preparing to take the IETLS exam because I hope to do a Masters degree abroad.
2) Why did you choose to do that type of work for?
My career path has taken me from an assistant to operation manager to head of the Operations department. You can learn a lots from your hiring manager, including leadership skills, communication skills, and presentation skills. This is especially true if your hiring manager is one of the Executive Committee members.
3) Do you like your job? why/why not?
Yes, I love my job because it's interesting and challenging enough. Moreover, I work with a great team from APAC.
4) What is the best thing about your job?
I led 2017-2018 corporate English training program for over 100,000 associates in China. Before my takeover, this program was only covered 20 associates in the Home office.
5) Do you prefer working alone or with others? Why?
I prefer to work as a part of a team. I am a team player with excellent interface communications skills, but also can work independently to drive for targeted results.
6) Do you miss being student?
Yes. Actually, I am preparing for my masters this year, and would like to apply for 2019 intake of an MBA course.
7) What subjects are you going to study?
I am going to apply for MBA, specializing in Global business. Because All businesses in the world now are becoming globally nowadays. This requires that the leaders to have professional global business knowledge.
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Very good writing, the main thing to check for is your use of commas. Be careful to not use them too often. Try saying the sentence out loud and seeing whether there is a natural pause or whether the comma breaks up the sentence too much.
Well done and good luck with your test!
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