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Going oversea for university study These days, more and more people have an upward tendency to study abroad because those who already felt that the world is getting smaller. This essay will discuss argument for and against about attending foreign university. Firstly, it is not hard to hear about the fact that studying other countries has some of negative influence on student who cannot adapt to environment change, for instance, mental decline owing to homesick, getting dietary problem due to unsuitable local foods. In addition, some of pupils might lose interest in studying and even drop out of university course because of lack of the confidence. What is the worst thing is that they would be exposed to delinquency such as drug taking. Having said that though, most students insist that entering foreign university might bring about getting much more competitiveness for their future. It would provide them with forcing to the circumstance that they have to use other languages. It also would be possible to get more opportunities to work overseas if they successfully graduated from the university. Moreover, it would help us broaden our mental vision to result from living foreign land such as learn about different solution to have an encounter with difficulty, a diversity of prospect by meeting multifarious culture and people. To sum up, although study abroad has various pros and cons, personally, I would like to say that if we were enough to control over ourselves physically and mentally, it would be exert positive impact on our future.

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Good job,,, actually you have a wide range of linguistic skills, but in English technical writing and even in conversational english, too much used of articles such as, OF, AS, THE and the rest can messed up your essays, my Tip would be, don't use too much word articles and words that has the same meaning, Tip! the more direct your sentence is the better..
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Going overseas for university study

These days, more and more people have an upward tendency to study abroad, because they already felt that the world is getting smaller. This essaywill discuss the pros and cons of attending a foreign university.

First, it is not hard to hear about the fact that studying other countries have some negative influence on student who cannot adapt to environment change, for instance, mental decline owing to homesick, getting dietary problem due to unsuitable local foods.
In addition, some of pupils might lose interest in studying and even drop out from the university because of lack of confidence.
the Worst thing is that, they would be exposed to deliquency such as drug abuse.

Most students have the thought that, studying to a foreign university will bring about more competitiveness in their future career, giving  them the idea that forcing the circumstances to learn other foreign languages. will be possible for them to get more opportunities to work overseas if they successfully graduated from the university.
Moreover, it would help them to  broaden their minds resulting from living in a foreign land such as learning about different solutions whenever they encounter such difficulties, a diversity of prospect by meeting multifarious culture and people.

To sum up, although studying abroad has various pros and cons, personally, I would like to say that if we have the enough control over ourselves physically and mentally, it would  exert a positive impact on our future.

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