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How is encouragement important to you?
A writer named Cora Coralina said "I know that nothing that we have lived makes sense, if we don't touch a person's heart the heart's person!"
I was 21 years old (today I am 36) and in my first year at (the) university. I didn't know many people and I had just [some]/a few friends.
I was studying Financial Math, and this subject is not easy, not at all, (by the way).
At this time, my [financial life]/finances was were not good and (my family and) I didn't have money to buy an HP financial calculator [HP] and I studied using a scientific calculator.
The teacher said "who doesn't have the HP will not get pass in the exam". This teacher was not friendly. Actually he was sometimes rude and people didn't like him.
Honestly I [honestly] stayed was afraid, because I didn't have the HP calculator, the subject was getting/becoming more complicated/difficult day by day and I wasn't doing well/it wasn't going well.
I decided to give up. I decided to go drop (out from) this subject. I talked to a friend and she didn't agree with my decision/me.
I was afraid, I was not confident, and I was sure that I would not pass (in) the exam.
This friend, called Vivian, was [essential]/critical/crucial in my life (and) in at this moment, because her friendship and her encouragement [helped me to gain power]/gave me strength to overcome/deal with/see through/get through/[going through] this situation.It was not easy, I [need to]/must confess.
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Many times, I got up at 5, arrived in for my job//for/at work at almost 6:30, studied until 7:40, and started working at 8.In my first exam I got the maximum grade, in the second exam I got the/a lower grade (when the calculations got/were more difficult and complex), but in the last exam I got the maximum grade, and I passed/[got it] !
My friend's encouragement was essential and I am grateful for to her until now/[today] !
Being a friend when everything is ok is very easy, but true friends really only exist when they touch our hearts forever.
How is encouragement important to you?
A writer named Cora Coralina said "I know that nothing that we have lived makes sense, if we don't touch the heart's person people's hearts!"I was 21 years old (today I am 36) and in my first year of university. I didn't know many people and I had just some friends.
I was studying Financial math and this subject is not easy.. not at all, by the way.
At this time, my financial life was not good and my family and I didn't have money to buy a financial calculator HP and I studied using a scientific calculator.
The teacher said "whoever don't doesn't have the HP will not get pass in the exam". This teacher was not friendly. Actually he was sometimes rude and people didn't like him.
I was honestly stayed afraid, because I didn't have the HP calculator, the subject was more complicated day by day and I wasn't going doing well.
I decided give up. I decided to go out from drop out of this subject. I talked to a friend and he she didn't agree with my decision.
I was afraid, I was not confident and I was sure that I would not pass in the exam.
This friend called Vivian was essencial essential in my life and in this moment, because her friendship and her encouragement helped me to gain power to going get through this situation.
It was not easy, I need to confess.
Many times, I got up at 5, arrived in at my job at almost 6:30, studied until 7:40 and started working at 8.
In my first exam I got the maximun maximum grade, in the second exam I got the a lower (or "the lowest") grade (when the calculations got more difficult and complex) but in the last exam I got the maximum grade and I got it!
My friend's encouragement was essential and I am grateful for her until today!
Being a friend when everything is ok is very easy, but true friends really exist when they touch our hearts forever.
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