My thesis abstract
Recently, veterinarian professionals and pet owners seek therapeutic alternatives for the management of chronic pain in animals. This is a difficult problem to deal with available analgesics with the need of long-term treatments which may be responsible for numerous side effects. Within this context, the veterinary physical rehabilitation is a very valuable tool in chronic pain management. The key of its current growth is the greater efficacy versus conventional pharmacological treatments (allowing a reduction in the doses) as well as its capacity achieving a better quality of life for our patients. These treatments success lies in establishing protocols from a multidisciplinary approach, with techniques and drugs that act through different mechanisms and at several different levels, so that their beneficial effects are potentiated and the side effects of pharmacological treatments are avoided or reduced.
Physical rehabilitation includes techniques such as hydrotherapy, which allows greater stability of the patient and a weightless effect, providing an ideal environment for the rehabilitation and management of pain; electrotherapy, which generates a physiological response that will be used for therapy, being very interesting in the management of pain; or electroacupuncture, which has been shown through several studies in animals to be highly effective, as an adjuvant or even as an alternative therapy in the management of numerous ailments that are presented joined with chronic pain.
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My thesis abstract
Recently, veterinarian professionals and pet owners have been seeking* therapeutic alternatives for the management of chronic pain in animals. This is a difficult problem to deal with available analgesics with where the need of long-term treatments which may be responsible for numerous side effects. Within this context, the veterinary physical rehabilitation is a very valuable tool in chronic pain management. The key of its current growth is the greater efficacy compared to the conventional pharmacological treatments (allowing a reduction in the doses) as well as its capacity achieving to provide a better quality of life for our patients. These success of this treatment success lies in establishing protocols based on a multidisciplinary approach, with techniques and drugs that act through different mechanisms and at several different levels, so that their beneficial effects potentiated become apparent and the side effects of pharmacological treatments are avoided or reduced.Physical rehabilitation includes techniques such as hydrotherapy, which allows greater stability of the patient and a weightless effect due to the absence of weights, and provides an ideal environment for the rehabilitation and management of pain; electrotherapy, which generates a physiological response that will be used for therapy, being very interesting is highly effective in the management of pain; or electroacupuncture, which has been shown through several studies in animals to be also highly effective, as an adjuvant or even as an alternative therapy in the management of numerous ailments that are presented joined associated with chronic pain**.
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* Notice the use of "recently" at the beginning of your sentence.
** Write smaller sentences!
Notice the repetitions that occur all over your text, such as "management of pain".
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My thesis abstract
Recently, veterinarian professionals and pet owners have been seeking therapeutic alternatives for the management of chronic pain in animals. This is a difficult problem to manage with available analgesics, which need to be used as long-term treatments and may have numerous side effects. Within this context, the veterinary physical rehabilitation is a very valuable tool in chronic pain management. The key to its current growth is the greater efficacy compared to conventional pharmacological treatments (allowing a reduction in the dosage) as well as its ability to offer a better quality of life for our patients. The success of these treatments lies in a multidisciplinary approach towards establishing (treatment) protocols, with techniques and drugs that act through different mechanisms and at several different levels, potentiating beneficial effects and avoiding or reducing the side effects of pharmacological treatments.Physical rehabilitation includes techniques such as hydrotherapy, which allows greater stability of the patient and a weightless effect and provides an ideal environment for the rehabilitation and management of pain; electrotherapy, an interesting pain management technique/modality which generates a physiological response; or electroacupuncture, which several animal studies have shown to be highly effective as an adjuvant or even as an alternative therapy in the management of numerous ailments (better: symptoms) that are presented* with chronic pain.
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* In medical English, the verb "present" (pri-zent) means the appearance or manifestation of symptoms.
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