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Students usually have a plenty of time between university semesters. In this period of time, students will face many choices for improving themselves. We could conclude that one is learning some a course is not connect with their majorities directly and another is being a volunteer help university's city or their hometowns. As far as I am concerned, the later one will be better.
First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or majors' knowledge that they gained in their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory is not correspond with the reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information which comes for textbook with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should better take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as example, I am a law student and I have already learned many information about law. However, once I did a volunteer at summary vocation in my second year in university I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice which made me gain progress developments which I can not get if I stay at school and learned other subjects.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationship with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But joining a volunteer work at local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that is no direct connection with their majors can expand their horizon and benefits to their future. However, they can also take this kind of course in their another semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
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Students usually have plenty of time between university semesters. In this period of time, students will face many choices for improving themselves. We could conclude that one of those choices is learning a course that does not connect with their majors directly and another is being a volunteer to help the university's city or hometown. As far as I am concerned, the latter will be better.First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or knowledge from within their major that they gained at their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory does not correspond with reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information that comes from the textbook and with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should better take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as an example. I am a law student and I have already learned lots of information about law. However, once I volunteered during summer vacation in my second year at the university. I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class that have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice, which made me gain progress developments which I could not have gotten if I had stayed at the school and learned other subjects.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, the university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at the university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationship with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But joining a volunteer network in the local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills, which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that is not in direct connection with their majors can expand their horizons and benefit their futures. However, they can also take this type of course in other semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
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Students usually have plenty of time between university semesters. In this period of time, students will face many choices for improving themselves. We could conclude that one is learning some courses which are not connected with their majors directly and another is being a volunteer to help the university's city or their hometowns. As far as I am concerned, the latter one will be better.
First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or professional knowledge that they gained in their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory does not correspond with the reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information which comes from textbooks with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should better take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as an example, I am a law student and I have already learned many information about law. However, once I volunteered at summary vocation in my second year in university I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice which made me gain progressive developments which I can not get if I stay at school and learned another subject.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationship with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But join a volunteer work at local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that has no direct connection with their majors can expand their horizon and be beneficial to their future. However, they can also take this kind of course in their another semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or professional knowledge that they gained in their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory does not correspond with the reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information which comes from textbooks with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should better take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as an example, I am a law student and I have already learned many information about law. However, once I volunteered at summary vocation in my second year in university I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice which made me gain progressive developments which I can not get if I stay at school and learned another subject.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationship with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But join a volunteer work at local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that has no direct connection with their majors can expand their horizon and be beneficial to their future. However, they can also take this kind of course in their another semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
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Students usually have plenty of time between university semesters. In this period of time, students face many choices for improving themselves. We could conclude that one is going on a course that is not connected with their majorities directly and another is being a volunteer helper in the university's city or their hometowns. As far as I am concerned, the second one is better.
First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or majors' knowledge that they gained in their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory is not corresponded with the reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information which comes from textbooks with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as example, I am a law student and I have already learned many information about law. However, once I volunteered at summary vocation in my second year in university I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice which made me gain progress developments which I can not get if I stay at school and learn other subjects.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationships with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But joining a volunteer work at local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that is not directly connected with their majors can expand their horizon and benefits to their future. However, they can also take this kind of course in their another semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
I'm sure that I made mistakes in the correction, english is not my mother tongue, sorry :(
First of all, it is a good chance to test their abilities or majors' knowledge that they gained in their universities. In fact, we have to admit that the theory is not corresponded with the reality. That is, there may exist some conflicts between the information which comes from textbooks with the practice. Therefore, students shouldn't put themselves in the academic environment completely. They should take part in some social practice like being a volunteer in their communities. Take myself as example, I am a law student and I have already learned many information about law. However, once I volunteered at summary vocation in my second year in university I found that there are so many laws that I learned in class have been abolished. So I renewed many new information about law at that practice which made me gain progress developments which I can not get if I stay at school and learn other subjects.
Second, doing this kind of work will improve the communication ability for those students. Likewise, university can not provide students the environment to communicate with the members of the society. When we are at university, we only need to deal with some simple relationships, such as the relationships with professors or advisors or the relationship with classmates, juniors or seniors. But joining a volunteer work at local community, students must meet more people. It's a good challenge and meanwhile it is a good chance for them to practice their social skills which will assist them in their future developments.
Admittedly, taking another course that is not directly connected with their majors can expand their horizon and benefits to their future. However, they can also take this kind of course in their another semesters. The break between university semesters is so important and long that they could be a volunteer.
I'm sure that I made mistakes in the correction, english is not my mother tongue, sorry :(
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