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We can’t live without news. We all have interests, jobs, and hobbies. And we need some news relevant to us.For example I work with Italian people and I must to know about current affairs in Italy. Also I often work in the Hermitage museum and I like to read news about the arts in Saint Petersburg.
But we always watch and listen to bad news, particularly political news. I don't think it's so bad. We must know the situation in our country and be able to understand the situation in the world. However firstly we must change to one or two good information sources.
I prefer to listen to Italian radio. On the radio I can learn about current affairs, cultural news, the political situation and actually listen Italian music. Also it gives me the opportunity to improve my knowledge in regional geography. Because this question is more important for me in my job.
I like to watch TV because I live alone. After arriving at my home I like to switch on the TV and do some house work. So I don’t feel a loneliness. Usually I watch a channel about culture, travelling and some talk-show.
I absolutely agree with the opinion that journalists create specific news for making an opinion more suitable for government. For this reason I don’t watch the everyday news on the federal channel.
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So I don’t feel a loneliness. (so i don't feel lonely) is standard way to phrase it, but you have given a poetic/emotional description of the feeling you experience. I like it, other people may not. there is nothing wrong with using English in this way. that's why i kept in in.
I think it isn’t so bad. this also is just a little non standard but something that you would hear some people say.
Also it gives me the opportunity to improve my knowledge in regional geography. Because this question is more important for me in my job.
I added the word also because you went suddenly from one subject to another between two sentence. There is nothing wrong with grammar of the second sentence, i replaced with an alternative word that is more likely to be used here by native speakers.
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