My weaknesses
I think one of them is that I'm very serious. In jobs I'm focus on my functions and try to do everything really well, my job is extremely important for me, thanks to it I can achieve goals and develop myself. So, maybe not many people know me, and Im not really interested in events outside the job, with job staff, I don't know, I consider that you spent too many time at job as to continue spending with the same people (environment). I have a lot of things to do, gym, studies, friends plans, family plans, music and languages classes.... So sometimes job's people think Im too self-conceited, even they think I dislike them. it's unfair.
Other one is I got bad temper with unfair things, I just don't know how people like to take advantage from other people, that's why I avoid to watch news on tv or radio.
I get upset when people arrive late to meetings, appointments, etc. This is simply a lack of respect, nowadays you have advanced watches, smart cell phones, a variety of transport services; you just simply do not have an excuse to be late.
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My weaknesses
I think one of them is that I'm very serious. In jobs, I focus on my functions( functions is not correct here, do you mean strengths? and try to do everything really well. My job is extremely important to me, because I can achieve goals and develop myself. Not many staff know me, as I'm not really interested in events outside the job. I consider that I spent too much time at work, to continue spending time with the same people (environment). I have a lot of things to do, gym, studies, friends plans, family plans, music and languages classes.... So sometimes people think Im too self-conceited, and even think I dislike them. it's unfair.Also, I have got a bad temper with unfair things, I just don't know how people can take advantage of other people, that's why I avoid watching news on tv or radio.
Lastly, I get upset when people arrive late to meetings, and appointments, etc. This is simply a lack of respect. nowadays you have advanced watches, smart cell phones, and a variety of transport services; you just simply do not have an excuse to be late.
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I get upset when people arrive late to for meetings, appointments and so on. This is simply a lack of respect -- nowadays, you have advanced watches with advanced features, smartphones smart cell phones, and a variety of transport services; you just simply do not have an excuse to be late.
Hi David Bec,
**There is nothing wrong with your use of "maybe". However, I substituted your word with "perhaps" as it is more formal (after all, you are writing to express your views to strangers on italki). "maybe" is more informal and used more commonly in casual conversations.
Do feel free to ask if you need any clarification on how I edited your writing.
I hope this helps you.
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My Weaknesses (Part One)
I think one of them is that I'm very serious. In jobs When I'm working on a task, I'm I focus on what I need to do, my functions and try to do everything really well. My job is extremely important to for me, and thanks to it, I can achieve my goals and develop myself. So, maybe **perhaps not many colleagues people know my personality me, and I'm not really interested in socialising with colleagues after office hours. events outside the job, with job staff, I don't know, I consider that you spent too many time at job as to continue spending with the same people (environment). I would prefer not to spend too much time interacting with the same people after work hours. I have a lot of things to do: gym, studies, activities with friends plans, family activities plans and music and languages classes. So sometimes, job's people my colleagues think I'm too self-conceited, or even they think that I dislike them. It's unfair.I get worked up when something unfair happens. I just don't know how why people like to take advantage of others. That's why I avoid watching to watch news on television or listening to news on radio.
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No, sometimes people can't help being late. A good leader does not have this attitude, and getting upset is not a good trait for a managerial position.
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