Toxic relationships
Sometimes it’s really hard to understand human bonds. Why do we strongly connect to another human being? Is it our weaknesses? Or do we see in others what we miss in ourselves? Sometimes our hidden dreams and deep needs meet exactly what someone is offering us. However, it’s a dangerous situation, especially if we aren't emotionally protected. People can take advantage of this situation and manipulate our feelings. This leads people to toxic relationships. It's not easy to be in this kind of relationship, and it's even harder to leave it.
This idiot became your world, your future and your only way to happiness, and when you decide to break up (or maybe he/she broke up with you because you were trying to stand up for yourself), it's a nightmare! You life falls apart and you don't know how to live anymore. You feel lost and hopeless. If you have a supportive family and friends, it's a little bit better, but not less painful.
It's a long and terrible road, but you have to be brave! Don't let the pain ruin your mind and future! Keep fighting!
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Toxic relationships
Sometimes it’s really hard to understand human bonds. Why do we strongly connect to another human being? Is it our weakness? Or do we see in others what we miss in ourselves? Sometimes our hidden dreams and deep needs meet exactly what someone is offering us. However, it’s a dangerous situation, especially if we aren't emotionally protected. People can take advantage of this situation and manipulate our feelings. This leads people to enter toxic relationships. It's not easy to be in this kind of relationship, and it's even harder to leave it.This idiot became your world, your future and your only way to happiness, and when you decide to break up (or maybe he/she broke up with you because you were trying to stand up for yourself), it's a nightmare! Your life falls apart and you don't know how to live anymore. You feel lost and hopeless. If you have a supportive family and friends, it's a little bit better, but not less painful.
It's a long and terrible road, but you have to be brave! Don't let the pain ruin your mind and future! Keep fighting!
Comment: Very good essay on an interesting topic, apart from some minor errors another recommendation for you is to improve the punctuation between the ideas to keep a good flow throughout the paragraphs.
Boa sorte com seu ingles :)
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Toxic relationships
Sometimes it’s really hard to understand human bonds. Why do we strongly connect to another human being? Is it our weaknesses? Or do we see in others what we miss in ourselves? Sometimes our hidden dreams and deep needs meet exactly what someone is offering us. However, it’s a dangerous situation, especially if we aren't emotionally protected. People can take advantage of this situation and manipulate our feelings. This leads people to toxic relationships. It's not easy to be in this kind of relationship, and it's even harder to leave it.This idiot became your world, your future and your only way to happiness, and when you decide to break up (or maybe he/she broke up with you because you were trying to stand up for yourself), it's a nightmare! You your life falls apart and you don't know how to live anymore. You feel lost and hopeless. If you have a supportive family and friends, it's a little bit better, but not less painful.
It's a long and terrible road, but you have to be brave! Don't let the pain ruin your mind and future! Keep fighting!
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