FCE essay (1) - Do you agree that community service works better than film? Okay, I am trying to prepare for FCE exams. I understand that my writing is horrible and I will need a lot of time to improve it. I hope Italki will help me. ___________________________________________________________ Everyone who committed a crime must be punished. There are several types of punishment depended on the seriousness of the crime. Service works and fines are given for minor offences such as bar fights, property damage, participation in unpermitted meetings. I have an option that service work will be more effective than fine. First of all it requires more physical and moral efforts then paying a fine. It gives delinquent time to rethink their actions and come to right conclusions. Furthermore offender should see the results of their deeds. for example, if he paints the walls with graffiti, he should be given the work of street cleaner who removes the signs from the walls. It gives a great opportunity to feel himself on the other side. Finally community service includes the work with psychologist who may have a positive influence on behavior of troubled ones. In conclusion I want to add that community service is the best way to prevent next offence and change someone's life.