A specific memorable friend
I have friends who already died.
One of them,I have a specific memorable friend.
He was a friend who we spent in the same kindergarten.
Our friends called him "Tat-chan".
We usually played together anyplace, for example on the field or somewhere.
Oneday, we went to the bomboo forest with our friends.
We just wanted to collect many bomboo shoots.
But only Tat-chan collected bomboo peels.
Why?
I asked to him."Why you collected only bomboo peels?"
And he said "I felt bomboo pells are bigger than bomboo shoot, so I got them."
Many friends said "You little stupid?"
I thought that too, but I was a little touched by him.
Because he interested in the difference point as compare with us.
It was little interested for me, but I did'nt know "Why?".
After a while he had a car accident on the road.
That moment, I was not in the place.
I heard it later he were bringed to the hospital after be hitted by a car.
In the hospital, a lot of ices put around his body.
He lived for several days, but finally he died.
Then I didn't fell so sad when he died, because I was too young.
Recently I remember about him sometime.
I think "If he still live now, what dose he want to do in his life?"
He has many things he want to do, I guess.
I am very frustrated nowadays.
And I think at the sametime,"if we have the things we want to do should be to do just now."
Life is not so long, we all should to do that we want to do things as soon as possible.
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A specific memorable friend
I have friends who already died.One of them was a specific and memorable friend.
He was a friend who was in kindergarten with me.
Our friends called him "Tat-chan".
We usually played together anywhere, for example on the field or somewhere.
One day, we went to the bamboo forest with our friends.
We just wanted to collect lots of bamboo shoots.
But Tat-chan only collected bamboo peels.
Why?
I asked him: "Why did you only collect bamboo peels?"
And he said: "I thought bamboo peels are bigger than bamboo shoots so I got them."
Many of ours friends asked: "Are you a little stupid?"
I thought that too, but I was a little touched by him.
Because he was interested in the difference point as compare with us. (not sure what you meant here sorry!)
It was little interesting for me, but I didn't know why.
After a while he had a car accident. on the road.
I wasn't there at the time.
I heard later he was taken to the hospital after being hit by a car.
In the hospital a lot of ice was put around his body.
He lived for several days but eventually he died.
I didn't feel so sad when he died because I was too young.
Nowadays I think about him sometimes.
I think: "If he were still alive now, what would he want to do with his life?"
He would have many things he would want to do, I guess.
I am very frustrated nowadays.
And I think at the same time, if we have things we want to do we just do them now.
Life is not so long. We should all do what we want to do as soon as possible.
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Do you mean that Tat-chan saw the world in a different way to most people?
Tom's correction is basically what I would write except this part, this is what I thought you meant:
...I thought that too, but I was also a little touched by him because he was interested in something entirely different to the rest of us.It intrigued me, but I never understood his reasoning....
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Grammar is very difficult, but I think you will improve quickly if you keep practicing like this.
You have mistakes, but you have said many complicated things in your writing, so well done!
I asked about what you want to achieve, because I want you to have more English practice too when you reply.
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To angela:
When I talked, My sentence are almost wrong about grammar and word.
So I want to improve my English.This is just a practice for me.
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What sort of things do you want to achieve?
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