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Hi. Ken.
Thank you for looking after my house for two weeks.
My trip was so nice. I started my journey from Paris and moved travelled [3] to Germany and Czech. I am back in Japan after returning from Poland. I visited some friends in each country and hanged up hung out. [4] There are many very beautiful places, but I was most I impressed places is by Prague Castle. [5]
That castle is in Prague, Czech. That  They started building it in AD 870 years. Wwhich means that the oldest part of the castle is over 1000 years old.
I bought some souvenirs[6] for you. If you are free next Monday morning, let's hang up.get together {or "hang out", although I suggest not using it twice.}

1. "Few" is used for countable things, and feedback is qualitative.

2. Okay, but the phrasing sounds Japanese. More natural: "although I believe my actual English level is B1.

3. "To move" would imply that you changed residences and lived in those places.

4. "To hang up" is to end a telephone call (かけました).

5. Or: "...but the place that most impressed me was..."

6. "Some" indicates more than one.

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There are a few suggestions but I do not know to reach B1 level. My level is always A2. (But my actual English level is B1, I believe)

The writing task.

You recently went on a trip for two weeks. While you were away, your friend, Ken, looked after your home. When you return, you decide to write an email to Ken. In the email:


thank Ken for helping you
tell Ken what you did on your trip
suggest a time to meet Ken.

Write about 90 words.

MY EMAIL:

Hi. Ken.
Thank you for looking after my house for two weeks.
My trip was so nice. I am back in Japan now.  I visited  Paris, Germany, Czechoslovakia and Poland.

I visited some friends in each country and hung out with them. There are many beautiful places. I was very impressed with Prague Castle in the Czech Republic.
The castle was first built in AD 870. Which means the oldest part of the castle is over 1000 years old.
I bought some souvenirs for you. If you are free next Monday morning, let's meet up.

you need to clarify a little more.

Did you visit Europe with Poland being the last stop before returning to Japan?

or did you visit these countries and at the same time organise a move? "move' suggests changing accommodation, a home/apartment etc. to live in permanently.

going from one place to another would not naturally be described as a move by many natives.

Cambridge english Writing and Improve

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Cambridge english Writing and Improve

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