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who cares! In Jun. 15. 2016. The world cup has begun. I was not sure I like this sport.but It is popular.and Dragon Boat Festival is coming.I need prepare for this holiday. My new job hasn’t found.I needed improve my skills and accumulate knowledge. I found my knowledge of the vehicle was poor .especially in GD&T. It as a fundamental skill in automotive industries. As a product engineer or mechanical engineer. I should learn the knowledge for improvement. In yesterday night. With my Cousin talking about my nerves and upset of the job. Actually i nerves about future ,especially finding jobs. I want to find a job I like in HEFEI City,ANHUI province. I just bought a house in hefei recently.If I choice to leave this city for a job. It must be for my dream. But I found it was hard . I Like to design job, i like become a product engineer, that is very cool if i can design the product. I can do my best way to finish my thoughts. If I haven’t experience in automotive industries. I couldn’t get a job from this company.

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In Jun. 15. 2016.
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That is would be very cool if I can could design the product. I can will do my best way to finish my thoughts. If I haven’t got experience in automotive industries, I couldn’t can't get a job from this company.
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Really good writing. Keep up the good work! I'm sorry you are having difficulties in finding a job. I think it is great that you have a dream job in mind. There is always more to learn, but isn't that one of the things that makes working as an engineer so interesting!? I hope you enjoy the festival. I don't know anything about the dragon boat festival (or football for that matter!)
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May you have a good luck to find the ideal job!

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