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Right now I have applied for a internship program in USA. The program request me present a essay about my reason for present me, for this reason I hope that someone can help me with a review and feedback about it.
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On the School, I had the opportunity with everyone to know about classic science,
and it woke up my interest and fascination about of areas as biology, chemistry and math. Thanks to this my pleasure in science, especially on the investigation area began since on early age.
During the high school could participate on science fairs with projetcs on biology, chemistry and system areas. However, my best experience was going to the expociencia 2007, on this fair sharer with reciclable car that followed the ligth, thanks to a photosensor. Too, I made a some projects that don’t have so much success, but thanks to everthing I wanted to study a some career with chemistry or biology.
Finally, I studied industrial microbiology and during near 4 years, I could know about great variety of areas as agriculture, enviromental, pharmaceutical and food. Too, during this time I take the possibility to acquiere knowledge such practical with theoretical, which let me, could work on bioinsumption Project with the Universidad Nacional de Colombia for near 1 year.
Adicionally, I have been 1 year in internship at Universidad de los Andes working on a funded Project by Fundacion del Banco de la República de Colombia. The aim is identify morphological differences of conidias tolerant and nontolerant at streest condition through microscopy tecniques.
Thanks at all these experience, I had the oppotunity of work and know the investigation area both in private and public universities. Addicionally, I could work with multidiciplinary groups, whereby I be able to get a new knowledge in disciplines as physical and electrical.
This experence also it has allowed me to create a critical character for dispute and support such my projects and investigation as those others.
Currently one month to graduate, I want continuos with my careers on investigation and for this I think that is necessary continue with getting at new knowledge. However, I wish get this knowledge on multidiciplinary enviromental because I like and enjoy to know about different disciplines. Too, I consider that get this on international space is the best option for me on this moment.
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In school, I had the opportunity to learn about classic science,
and it began my interest and fascination of subjects like biology, chemistry and math. Thanks to this, my enjoyment in science, especially io the investigation area, began at an early age.
During high school, I was able to participate in science fairs with projects on biology, chemistry and system areas. However, my best experience was going to the expociencia 2007, at this fair there was a recyclable car that followed light, thanks to a photosensor. Also, I made a some projects that didn't have a lot of success, but thanks to all of this I wanted to study a degree in chemistry or biology.
Finally, I studied industrial microbiology and during almost 4 years, I got to know about a great variety of subjects such as agriculture, the environment, pharmacy and food. Also, during this time I took the possibility to acquire knowledge both practical and theoretical, which enabled me to work on a bio consumption project with the Universidad Nacional de Colombia for nearly 1 year.
Additionally, I have been working for a year as an intern at Universidad de los Andes on a project funded by Fundacion del Banco de la República de Colombia. The aim is identify morphological differences of conidias tolerant and non-tolerant at streest condition through microscopy techniques.
Thanks to all these experience, I had the opportunity to work and know the investigation area both in private and public universities. Additionally, I could work with multidisciplinary groups, whereby I was able to gain new knowledge in disciplines such as physics and electronics.
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