happy Valentine's day
I would appreciate it if you could correct me
tomorrow is Valentine's day.
I didn't care whether or not it would be Valentine's day until last year.
but this year is different because I like somebody in my class and I am thinking about giving him a chocolate.
he is very kind to me. although he is not handsome but he makes me feel a special emotion.
now it has been three months. I think that the Valentine's day is a good chance to show how much I like him.
if I give him a chocolate,will he be happy?
I really don't know but I hope so.
I can't wait to see his all figure. Valentine's day hurray.
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Happy Valentine's Day
It's Valentine's day tomorrow.I never really cared about it, until the last year.
However, this year is different, because I like somebody from my class and I am thinking about giving them chocolates.
He is very kind to me and even though he is not handsome, but he makes me feel a special emotion.
This has been going on for three months now. I think that the Valentine's day is a great opportunity to show how much I like him.
Would he be happy if I gave him chocolates?
I really don't know, but I can only hope so.
I can't wait to see the outcome. Valentine's day, hurray! (or maybe what you meant to say was 'hurry' as in 'come quicker')
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Tomorrow is Valentine's Day. I didn't care about Valentine's Day until last year. But this year is different, because I like somebody in my class, and I am thinking about giving him a chocolate. He is very kind to me.
He is not handsome, but he makes me feel special. It has been three months. I think that Valentine's Day is a good day to show how him how I feel. If I give him a chocolate, will he be happy? I really don't know but I hope so. I can't wait to see his all figure (What does this mean?). Valentine's Day, hurray!
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