To My Friends

I was struggling with my life and I knew that I can't couldn't change it easily.

They gave me a lot of options that I did't think hadn't thought of.

Living in this world is not easy, but it can be changed by myself.  {Sounds better/more natural as a direct statement: "but I can change it."}

I hope I can see have a little bit different view tomorrow.

I was struggling with my life and I knew that I can't change it easily.

They gave me a lot of options that I did't think.

Living in this world is not easy but it can be changed by my self.

I hope I can see little bit different view tomorrow.

Today, I was really appreciative of my friends I talked to today.

I was struggling with my life and I knew that it would not be easy to change.

They identifies a lot of options that had not occurred to me.

Living in this world is not easy but I can chnge my outlook on it.

I hope I can see things a little differently tomorrow.