First day in italki

I graduated from Beijing Normal University and received a masters degree in education. I used to be a Psychological counsellor/psychologist (depends on your qualification) in a primary school, and now I am now preparing for my PhD application.

I am really good at Mandarin, but I still need to improve my English skills. Anyway, Feel free to contact me if you wanna want to learn Chinese, and  - and if you can help me with my English, I will be very grateful.

Some comments:

I can totally understand what you're trying to say, so, well done! I made a few corrections and changed some words around, so that it sounds more natural, to me. I would avoid using "wanna" as much as possible. I'd suggest you use "wanna" only when you want to sound very casual with friends. Keep up the good work!

First day in italki

it's a bit of a mix of formal standard English and informal English that isn't working very well together. 

First day in italki

I recently found this amazing website where I can practice my language, meet some new friends and possibly be useful to someone who wants to learn Chinese.

I graduated from Beijing Normal University where I received a masters degree in Education. I was a Psychological counselor in a primary school and now I am preparing for my PhD Application.

The rest is okay as it seems you're not trying to use standard English.