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an essay for IELTS People in limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior. Do you agree? In the modern age, celebrities have a huge capability to impact on followers’ personality by their good behavior. I absolutely agree. First of all, famous people effect on their fans because they tend to be similar to their favorites. For example, a singer Vera Brejneva likes to visit children center where unhealthy youngsters are exciting to see visitors. She often posts pictures on her page in the Instagram and encourages people to support these children. It is not necessary to have an amount of money to help. People can help with their work. For instance, if you are a hairdresser you can do haircut or if you are a manicurist you can do cut nails or polish nail to them. Her behavior teaches to help and support people who in need. This is a huge impact in personal development. For the second, children often looking at their favorites and decided to choose the same job. But not always they are able to reach the aim. For example, well-known football player Andrey Shevchenko was born in the poor family and had no opportunity to create his career as a successful player. But by following his work people could notice how hard he is working. As a result, he achieves his goal. Therefore, children can see an amazing example that by working hard all dreams could come true. It is not essential to have a lot of money to become successful because by hard work person has more chance to reach a goal. To conclude, I believe that celebrities have the responsibility to develop well followers’ personality through their good behavior.

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An essay for IELTS

People in limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior. Do you agree?
In the modern age, celebrities have a huge capability to impact on their followers’ personalities y by through their good behavior. I absolutely agree.
First of all, famous people e  affect on their fans because they tend to behave in a similar way to their favourites (or heroes/idols). For example, a singer Vera Brejneva likes to visit childrens' centres where unhealthy youngsters are exciting to see visitors. She often posts pictures on her instagram page, in the Instagram and encourages people to support these children. It is not necessary to have an amount of money to help. People can help with their work. For instance, if you are a hairdresser you can do haircuts or if you are a manicurist you can do cut or polish nails or polish nail to for them. Her behavior teaches others to help and support people who are in need. This is can have a huge impact on personal development.
For the s  Secondly, children often looking at their favorites and decided to choose the same job. But not they can't always they are able to reach the achieve their aim.
For example, well-known football player Andrey Shevchenko was born in the a poor family and had no opportunity to create develop his career as a successful player. But by following his work, people could noticed how hard he is worked ing. As a result, he achieved his goal. Therefore, children can see an amazing example that by working hard all dreams could come true. It is not essential to have a lot of money to become successful because by hard work a person has more a greater chance to reach a goal.
To conclude, I believe that celebrities have the responsibility to develop well positively influence their fans followers’ personality through their good behavior.

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