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Lakshmi (2013) - film review - part 1. Namaste, Aaj Main ek film ke bare men likhna vala hoon. Jo purana nahi hai. Iska naam Lakshmi hai. Yeh film me, lakshmi ek jawaan larkee ka nam hai. Wo ek gharib parivar me rehetee hai. Jese unke pese nahi hai, to uske papa mama usko bechte hai. Ek badha ghar main pochtee hai. Usko nahi pata vahaan kya karegee. Bahut dukee hai kyonkee todha samey ke bad, wo ghar ka malik usko ek kamra me lata hai, aur wo usko balaktaar karta hai. Usko pata lagta hai ki abse, uski zindagi bahut alag ho jaegee. Vaastav me, abse lakshmi, wo admi ke liye kam karegee. Halaki uski umar 13 sal hai, wo ek veshya ho jaegee. Part 1 katam ho gaya! Today I am going to write about a film. It is not old. Its name is Lakshmi. In this movie, lakshmi is the name of a young girl. She lives in a poor family. As her parents don't have money, they sell her. She arrives in a big house. She doesn't know what she will do there. It is sad because after a bit of time, the owner of the house brings her in a room and he rapes her. She figures out than from now, her life will be very different. Indeed, from now lakshmi will work for this man. Although she is only 13 years old, she will be a prostitute. Part 1 is over. Thank you for your help my friends :)

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Namaste,

Aaj Main ek film ke bare men likhna vala hoon. Jo purani nahi hai. Iska naam Lakshmi hai. Is film me, lakshmi ek jawaan larkee ka nam hai. Wo ek gharib parivar me rehetee hai. Jab unke pas paise nahi hote hai, to uske papa(pita) mommy(maa) usko bech dete hai. Ek badhe ghar main pochtee hai. Usko nahi pata vahaan kya karegee. Bahut dukee hai kyonkee todha samey ke bad, wo ghar ka malik usko ek kamra me lata hai, aur wo uska balaktaar karta hai. Usko pata chalata hai ki abse, uski zindagi bahut alag ho jaegee. Vaastav me, abse lakshmi, us admi ke liye kam karegee. Halaki uski umar 13 sal hai, wo ek veshya ban jaegee.

Part 1 katam ho gaya!

Today I am going to write about a film. It is not old. Its name is Lakshmi. In this movie, lakshmi is the name of a young girl. She lives in a poor family. As her parents don't have money, they sell her. She arrives in a big house. She doesn't know what she will do there. It is sad because after a bit of time, the owner of the house brings her in a room and he rapes her. She figures out than from now, her life will be very different. Indeed, from now lakshmi will work for this man. Although she is only 13 years old, she will be a prostitute.

Part 1 is over.

Thank you for your help my friends :)

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