The first without Google. I'm really Bad? :-|
Hello, everyone!
Well, Im Jhonny Mesquita, a brazilian 25 years old man, and this is my first text!
I like english since I was a child, but never really had an english talk with someone. I just learned from school, RPG games, and than movies and series... and now I can watch a lecture, movie, series and documentaries without a portuguese subtitle. I can read books too, but need to translate some new (but fewer) words that I never saw ou don't remenber.
Next week I will have to write a dissertation text in english for a job selection, so I really wana ('want to'?) know how bad are my english write, couse I remember that every time I tryed to write just one single word, I forgot letters. :-|
I've found this site some time ago, but never really had entered. I probrably will try a talk with some professor, but they will make some correction in some text that I will send? Couse I my big problem is whith the write.
Thank you all for the time and oportunity!
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The first without Google. Am I really Bad? :-|
Hello, everyone!Well, I'm Jhonny Mesquita, a 25-year-old Brazilian man, and this is my first text!
I have liked English since I was a child, but never really had an English conversation with anyone. I just learned from school, RPG games, and then movies and series...and now I can watch lectures, movies, series and documentaries without Portuguese subtitles. I can read books too, but need to translate (a few) new words that I have never seen or don't remember.
Next week I will have to write a dissertation text in English for a job selection, so I really wanna ('want to'?) know how bad my English writing is, because I remember that every time I tried to write just one single word, I forgot letters. :-|
I found this site some time ago, but never really used it. I will probably try a talk with a professor, but will they make corrections to texts that I send? Because my big problem is with writing.
Thank you all for your time and opportunity!
Instead of "opportunity" you might want to say "Thank you all for your time and your help!"
For "job selection" it might be better to say "job interview", but I'm not sure.
"Wanna" is informal/slang for "want to".
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Hello, everyone!
Well, Im Jhonny Mesquita, a 25 year old brazilian man, and this is my first text!
Ilike have liked english since I was a child, but never really had an english talk with someone. I just learned from school, RPG games, and than then movies and series... and now I can watch a lecture, movie, series and documentaries without a portuguese subtiles. I can read books too, but need to translate some new (but few) words that I never saw ou or don't remenber.
Next week I will have to write a dissertation text in english for a job selection, so I really wana ('want to'?) know how badare is my written english write, couse 'cause I remember that every time I tried to write just one single word, I forgot letters. :-|
I've found this site some time ago, but never really had entered. I probrably will trya to talk with some professor, but they will will they make some corrections in some text that I will send? 'Cause I my big problem is with the write writing.
Thank you all for the time and oportunity!
Well, Im Jhonny Mesquita, a 25 year old brazilian man, and this is my first text!
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Next week I will have to write a dissertation text in english for a job selection, so I really wana ('want to'?) know how bad
I've found this site some time ago, but never really had entered. I probrably will try
Thank you all for the time and oportunity!
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The first without Google. I'm really Bad? :-|
Hello, everyone!Well, Im Jhonny Mesquita, a brazilian 25 years old man, and this is my first text!
I like english since I was a child, but never really had an english talk with someone. I just learned from school, RPG games, and than movies and series... and now I can watch a lecture, movie, series and documentaries without a portuguese subtitle. I can read books too, but need to translate some new (but fewer) words that I never saw ou don't remenber.
Next week I will have to write a dissertation text in english for a job selection, so I really wana ('want to'?) know how bad are my english write, couse I remember that every time I tryed to write just one single word, I forgot letters. :-|
I've found this site some time ago, but never really had entered. I probrably will try a talk with some professor, but they will make some correction in some text that I will send? Couse I my big problem is whith the write.
Thank you all for the time and oportunity!
Carla & Sergio already corrected your text. I'm curious about your dissertation text you have to write next week. Depending on how long it will be, I could correct it and send it back to you. However, don't wait to the last minute before sending it, as I'm generally pretty busy working with many countries. Send your dissertation to [email protected] which I check regularly.
Gil in Canada
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Very good! If you want to talk to a teacher take a look at my teacher profile and let's schedule a lesson, I will be more than happy to help you with your writing skills or any other language related issue you may have.
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