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I did an internship in a company called D-Medica, which sells hospitals, nursing homes or chemists medical products. It was last summer during 1 month. I was in charge to write the reports of the day, that means, to write what we had done during the day. In fact, I was with one of the sellers, and we visited hospitals or nursing homes to convince them to buy our products. We negotiated all the details of each contract, explained to them the utility of our products, the differences in comparison with the others companies, and how the machines we could sell worked, but we also listen to what they really needed to improve their services. I have learnt a lot during that internship about business and the world of companies. I worked in a pleasant working environment: all the team was always motivated, So I hope entering a business school to have the opportunity in the future to word in a company.
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Can you correct my text, please ?
I did an internship in a company, which sells medical products to hospitals, nursing homes or chemists medical products. It was last summer during 1 month. I was in charge to write of writing the reports of the day daily reports, that means, to write what we had done during the day. In fact, I was with one of the sellers, and we visited hospitals or nursing homes to convince them to buy our products. We negotiated all the details of each contract, explained to them the utility of our products, the differences in comparison with the others companies, and how the machines we could sell worked, but we also listened to what they really needed to improve their services. I have learnt a lot during that internship about business and the world of companies during that internship. I worked in a pleasant working environment: all the team was always motivated,. So I hope to entering a business school to have the opportunity in the future to word (what do you mean by "word" here?) in a company.0
Can you correct my text please ?
I did an internship in a company called D-Medica, which sells medical products to hospitals, nursing homes and chemists. The internship was last summer and lasted for a month. I was in charge of writing reports about what we had done during the day. I shadowed one of the sellers, and we visited hospitals and nursing homes to convince them to buy our products. We negotiated all the details of each contract, explained to the clients the usefulness and advantages of our products, the differences in comparison with other companies, and how the machines we sold worked, but we also listened to what the clients really needed to improve their services. I have learnt a lot during that internship about the business world and how companies work. There was a pleasant working environment in the company: the whole team was always motivated. I hope by entering a business school to have the opportunity in the future to work in such a company.0
Can tou you correct my text please ?
I did an internship in a company called D-Medica, which sells hospitals, nursing homes or and chemists medical products. It was last summer during for 1 one month. I was in charge to of writing the reports of the day, that means, to write what we had done during the day. In fact, I was with one of the sellers, and we visited hospitals or nursing homes to convince them to buy our products. We negotiated all the details of each contract and explained to them the utility of our products. the Which included differences in comparison with the others companies, and how the machines we could sell worked, but we also listened to what they really needed to improve their services. I have learned a lot during that internship about business and the world of companies. I worked in a pleasant working environment; all the team was always motivated. So I hope to entering a business school to have the opportunity in the future to work in a company.Careful when you re-read it as you had some easy typos.
Lucy
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