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The reason i am here
Hello everyone! This is my first text in English and I expect to write it well but you can correct me if you see any mistakes. The reason I am learning this language is that in Spain it has been increasingly important to speak English if you want to get a job. Actually, I am looking for any practice to improve my knowledge about communication. These last four years I have been studying for a university degree, and now I want to work in my area.Today, I am a little depressed because I realized that it's going to be very difficult to find a job in my country. There are a lot of companies that are looking for students to work for them, but they don't give salaries. It's very outrageous! I try to keep myself encouraged but it is difficult with this employment situation.
I have been thinking of going to England to work. Many people tell me there are a lot of jobs in London. Furthermore, I think traveling is the best manner/way to improve my English.
The reason i am here
Hello everyone! This is my first text in English and I expect to write it well but you can correct me if you see any failures errors. The reason I am learning this language is that in Spain it is increasingly important to speak English if you want to get a job. Actually Currently, I am looking for any practices opportunity to improve my knowledge about communication. This These last four years I have been studying for a university degree, and now I want to work in my area (field) of study.Today I am a little depressed because I realized that it's going to be very difficult to find a job in my country. There are a lot of companies that are looking for students recent graduates to work in, but they didn't don't pay anything. It's very outrageous! I try to keep me myself encouraged but it is difficult with this employment situation.
I have been thinking to about go to searching for work in England to work. Some much people tell me that there are a lot of jobs in London. Furthermore, I think traveling is the best manner way to improve my English.
Note: your English is very good! stay positive and good things will come your way. wishing you the best in your search!
The reason i am here
Hello everyone! This is my first text in English and I expect to write it well but you can correct if you see any failures. The reason I am learning this language is that in Spain it is increasingly important to speak English if you want to get a job. Actually, I am looking for any ways practices to improve my knowledge of communication. For the last four years I have been studying for a university degree, and now I want to work in my area.Today I am a little depressed because I realized that it's going to be very difficult to find a job in my country. There are a lot of companies that are looking for students to work for them, but they don't pay anything. It's very outrageous! I am trying to keep me motivated but it is difficult with this employment situation.
I have been thinking about going to England to work. Some many people tell me there are a lot of jobs in London. Furthermore, I think traveling is the best way to improve my English.
gente - people - es plural en inglés
gente es algo que se puede contar, por lo tanto debemos poner "many"
Muy bien laura, solamente sigue así.
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The reason I am here
Hello everyone! This is my first text in English and I expect to write hope to write it well but you can correct it if you see any failures mistakes. The reason I am learning this language is that in Spain it is increasingly important to speak English if you want to get a job. Actually, I am looking for any practices opportunity to improve my knowledge about communication. This For the last four years I have been studying for a university degree, and now I want to work in my area field (of study).Today I am a little depressed because I realized (realised in the UK) that it's going to be very difficult to find a job in my country. There are a lot of companies that are looking for students to work in for them, but they didn't don't pay anything. It's very outrageous! I try to keep me myself encouraged motivated but it is difficult with this the current employment situation.
I have been thinking to go about going to England to work. Some much Many people tell me there are a lot of jobs in London. Furthermore, I think traveling is the best manner way to improve my English.
Great work!
The reason i am here
Hello everyone! This is my first text in English and I expect to write it well but you can correct if you see any failures.The reason I am learning this language is that in Spain it is increasingly important to speak English if you want to get a job. Actually, I am looking for any ways to improve my knowledge of communication. For the last four years I have been studying for a university degree, and now I want to work in my area.
Today I am a little depressed because I realized that it's going to be very difficult to find a job in my country. There are a lot of companies that are looking for students to work for them, but they don't pay anything. It's very (we can't use outrageous with 'very'. If you want to use a modified for emphasis, you could use 'completely', 'totally', 'absolutely', etc) outrageous! I am trying to keep myself encouraged (motivated/positive?) but it is difficult with this employment situation.
I have been thinking about going to England to work. Some many people tell me there are a lot of jobs in London. Furthermore, I think traveling is the best way to improve my English.
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