How my dog has changed from the day 1 (Please correct my english)
I remember that day when my daughter and i went to know for the first time to our little dog. We hadn't met him yet, but we knew his name. it wast Rocky. And rocky as you may imagine it's not a much particular name, is very common.. When i heard that name coming out from my daughters mouth i saw the image of the famous boxer just hitting Ivan drago in the face. BUT it wasn't because of that Rocky that my daugther picked that name.. it was because of the "Paw Patrols" one.
When we went back home, rocky was in the backseat with my daughter. he was crying, because we were splitting him from his mom, it was sad, but we were sure that we would give them a happy life. I hope we have fulfilled that!
The first year of rocky's life was pretty normal, he destroyed the most he could, every piece of wood he found in our house had his mark on it. The Sofa, chairs, pillow had his smell. I remember the Vet saying, this breed is like that, they enjoy destroying things. (forgot to tell you.. rocky is a Beagle). With the pass of time rocky became more rough, he started to bark to the strangers (Not neighbors, just strangers)... but now, when he's 1 year and 6 months he stopped to destroy stuffs! he now love to be caressed, he sleep with me and looks me with compassion when i am tired. when i want to play whit him he is always ready for that, he is not lazy, but is not restless as before. looks like know he es enjoying the rhythm of our life.
i am not sure if rocky is the one that has changed or if was me. but i'm pretty sure that he is becoming a different dog with the pass of time, that makes me feel kind of worry because his life advances very fast and he changes every month a little.. it's inevitable to think he has less time than us to enjoy, to be happy, so i hope i can always give him a smile a reason to bark loud! to jump, to be the happy dog that he deserves to be.
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How my dog has changed from the day 1 (Please correct my english)
I remember that day when my daughter and I got to know our (little) dog for the first time. We hadn't met him yet, but we knew his name. it wast Rocky. And Rocky as you may imagine it's not a very particular name, because it is very common.. When I heard that name coming out of my daughter's mouth I saw the image of the famous boxer (just) hitting Ivan Drago in the face. But, that wasn't why my daughter picked the name Rocky. It was because of the "Paw Patrols" one.When we went back home, Rocky was in the backseat of the car with my daughter. He was crying because we were splitting him from his mom. It was sad, but we were sure that we would give him a happy life. I hope we have fulfilled that!
The first year of Rocky's life was pretty normal. He destroyed (the most he could/anything he could), every piece of wood he found in our house had his mark on it. The sofa, chairs and pillow (all) had his smell. I remember the Vet saying, "this breed is like that, they enjoy destroying things." (I forgot to tell you that Rocky is a Beagle). As time went on Rocky became more rough, he started to bark at strangers (not neighbors, just strangers)... but now, when he's 1 year and 6 months old and he stopped destroying things! He now loves to be caressed and he sleeps with me and looks at me with compassion when I am tired. When I want to play with him he is always ready (for that). He is not lazy but he is not restless like/as before. It looks like he is now enjoying the rhythm of our life.
i am not sure if Rocky is the one that has changed or if it was me. But I'm pretty sure that he is becoming a different dog as time goes on. That makes me feel kind of worried because his life advances very fast and he changes a bit/little every month. it's inevitable to think he has less time than us to enjoy and to be happy, so I hope I can always make him smile, and give a reason for him to bark loudly, to jump, and to be the happy dog that he deserves to be.
Great job! Your English is very good.
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I remember that day when my daughter and i went to meet for the first time our little dog. We hadn't met him yet, but we knew his name, it wast Rocky. And rocky as you may imagine it's not a much particular name, it is very common.. When i heard that name coming out from my daughters mouth i saw the image of the famous boxer just hitting Ivan drago in the face, BUT it wasn't because of that Rocky that my daugther picked that name.. it was because of the "Paw Patrols" one.
When we went back home, rocky was in the backseat with my daughter. he was crying, because we were splitting him from his mom, it was sad, but we were sure that we would give him a happy life. I hope we have fulfilled that!
The first year of rocky's life was pretty normal, he destroyed the most he could, every piece of wood he found in our house had his mark on it. The Sofa, chairs, pillows had his smell. I remember the Vet saying, this breed is like that, they enjoy destroying things. (forgot to tell you.. rocky is a Beagle). With the pass of time rocky became more rough, he started to bark tothe strangers (Not neighbors, just strangers)... but now, when he's 1 year and 6 months he has stopped to destroying stuff! he now loves to be caressed, he sleeps with me and looks me with compassion when i am tired. when i want to play whit him he is always ready for that, he is not lazy, but he is not restless as before. looks like now he is enjoying the rhythm of our life.
i am not sure if rocky is the one that has changed or if it was me. but i'm pretty sure that he is becoming a different dog with the pass of time, that makes me feel kind of worried because his life advances very fast and he changes every month a little.. it's inevitable to think he has less time than us to enjoy, to be happy, so i hope i can always give him a smile a reason to bark loud! to jump, to be the happy dog that he deserves to be.
When we went back home, rocky was in the backseat with my daughter. he was crying, because we were splitting him from his mom, it was sad, but we were sure that we would give him a happy life. I hope we have fulfilled that!
The first year of rocky's life was pretty normal, he destroyed the most he could, every piece of wood he found in our house had his mark on it. The Sofa, chairs, pillows had his smell. I remember the Vet saying, this breed is like that, they enjoy destroying things. (forgot to tell you.. rocky is a Beagle). With the pass of time rocky became more rough, he started to bark to
i am not sure if rocky is the one that has changed or if it was me. but i'm pretty sure that he is becoming a different dog with the pass of time, that makes me feel kind of worried because his life advances very fast and he changes every month a little.. it's inevitable to think he has less time than us to enjoy, to be happy, so i hope i can always give him a smile a reason to bark loud! to jump, to be the happy dog that he deserves to be.
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How My Dog Has Changed
I remember the day when my daughter and I first went to meet our little dog. We hadn't met him yet, but we already knew what his name was going to be. It was Rocky. As you can might imagine, Rocky, is not an unusual name.When I heard that name coming out of my daughter's mouth I saw the image of the famous boxer hitting Ivan Drago in the face. However, it wasn't because of that particular Rocky that my daugther picked that name. It was because of the Rocky from "Paw Patrols."On our way back home Rocky was in the backseat with my daughter. He was crying because we had just separated him from his mom. It was sad, but we were sure that we would give him a happy life. I hope we have fulfilled that promise.
The first year of Rocky's life was pretty normal. He destroyed as much as he could. Every piece of wood he found in our house had his marks on it.The sofa, chairs, and even the pillow smelled like him. I remember the vet telling us that this breed tends to be like that. They enjoy destroying things. I forgot to mention that Rocky is a beagle. With the passing of time Rocky became rougher. He started to bark at complete strangers. Now that he's a year and six months he has stopped destroying stuff. He now prefers to be caressed. He sleeps with me and looks at me with compassion when I'm tired. When I want to play with him he is always ready. He's not lazy. On the other hand, he's not as restless as before. He looks as though he's enjoying the rhythm of life.
I am not sure if Rocky is the one that has changed or if it's me. Though I'm pretty sure that he's becoming a different dog with the passing of time. That makes me worry because his life is advancing very fast, and he changes very little each month. It's inevitable to think he has less time than us to enjoy. I hope I can always give him a reason to smile, bark loudly, and jump. He deserves happiness.
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