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My life in London I've arrived in London this week. From Heathrow airport I took Heathrow express train to Paddington station, and then I arrived home. Now I live at host family. Home owners are Sophie and her husband Daniel. Their two sons also live with them. I study English at a school in the centre of London. I have lessons from 08:45am to 12:00am. After I usually go somewhere. Certainly I don't know where I want to go and so I look at the map and choose some interesting places for visiting. For example, yesterday I visited Green Park and St James Park near Buckingham Palace. These parks were so beautiful and I was really impressed by them. I've never seen such variety of goose before. It is so great to see some wildlife spots in the centre of a big city. Today I've been walking along the Regent's canal for about two hours and it was also great.

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My (1) Life in London

I've arrived in London this week. From Heathrow airport, I took a Heathrow Express train to Paddington station, and then I arrived home -- I live at with a host family. The home owners are Sophie and her husband, Daniel. Their two sons also live with them.

I study English at a school in the centre of London. I have lessons from 8.45 a.m. to 12.00 a.m. After that, I usually go somewhere. Certainly (2) Most of the time, I don't know where I want to go and so I look at the map and choose some interesting places to visit. for visiting. For example, yesterday, I visited Green Park and St James Park near Buckingham Palace. These parks (3) are were so beautiful and I was really impressed by them. I've never seen such a variety of geese before. It is so great to see some wildlife spots in the centre of a big city.
Today, I (4) had been walking along the Regent's Canal for about two hours and it was also great.

Hi Dariy,

Do allow me to provide some suggestions:

(1) There are different guidelines on writing titles. We capitalise the first letter of each word (i.e. Life) except for prepositions (i.e. in). 

(2) "Certainly" is used to express the meaning of definitely or without a doubt. I presume that you wanted a word that expresses frequency. Therefore, I used the phrase "Most of the time".

(3) We use present tense (i.e. are) here, as the parks are still there as you were writing. 

(4) We use past perfect continuous tense (i.e. had been + verb-ing) as you walked for a duration in the past and you stopped doing so in the past as well. If you use present perfect continuous tense (i.e. have been + verb-ing), it means you were still walking as you wrote this post.

I hope this helps you.

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