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IELTS-letter You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with our cafeteria as in my opinion, although it is a wonderful place, some actions should be taken to make it better. There are some reasons why this cafeteria is one off my favourite facilities in the campus. Firstly, the food supplied in it is healthy and delicious. Secondly, it creates a warm atmosphere that let you feel comfortable when you are eating. However, there is still room to make some progress for the cafeteria. For example, the diversity of food sometimes does disappoint me. In some cases, there are just several kinds of hamburgers or sandwiches available during suppers. Besides this, there is no food-heating service in the cafeteria so some students may feel inconvenient because their eating habits could not be satisfied. It would be more friendly if in the cafeteria, students could be supplied with much more options, just like Asian food, as there are more and more students from China. Moreover, to put a microwave oven in the corner could easily meet the demands of some students who prefer warm food. I definitely hope my suggestions could help our cafeteria be a more cherishable facility in our college. Yours faithfully, Eric

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IELTS-letter

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter,

explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with our cafeteria as in my opinion, although it is a wonderful place, some actions should be taken to make it better.

There are some reasons why this cafeteria is one off my favourite facilities in the campus. Firstly, the food supplied in it is healthy and delicious. Secondly, it creates a warm atmosphere that lets you feel comfortable when you are eating.

However, there is still room to make some progress for the cafeteria. For example, the diversity of food sometimes does disappoint me. In some cases, there are just several kinds of hamburgers or sandwiches available during suppers. Besides this, there is no food-heating service in the cafeteria so some students may feel inconvenienced because their eating habits can not be satisfied.

It would be more friendly if in the cafeteria, students could be supplied with much more options, like Asian food, as there are more and more students from China. Moreover, to put a microwave oven in the corner could easily meet the demands of some students who prefer warm food.

I definitely hope my suggestions can help our cafeteria be a more cherished facility in our college.

Yours faithfully,

Eric

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