How was my holiday.
I was beginning the holiday visited my brother, he has a beautiful baby, it was a boy and he is six months. We enjoyed so much with him.
Other day i took my daughter to the mall to meet her friends. They enjoyed in the ball pool and then they had a snack.
I went to the cinema with my husband, we watched Han Solo, a film Star Wars saga.
I started watching in the holiday The Rain serie at Netflix and finally on sunday i enjoyed the cold weather at home.
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I would write it like this:
At the beginning of our holiday we visited my brother. He has a beautiful six month old baby boy. We enjoyed our time with him very much.
On another day, I took my daughter to the mall to meet her friends. They enjoyed playing pool and eating a snack afterwards.
I also went to the cinema with my husband to watch Han Solo, a Star Wars saga film.
I also started watching the series, The Rain, on Netflix at home. On Sunday, the last day, I enjoyed staying at home because of the cold weather.
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How was my holiday.
In the beginning of the holiday I visited my brother, he has a beautiful baby, it is a boy and he is six months old. We very much enjoyed the time we spent with him.The other day I took my daughter to the mall to meet her friends. They enjoyed themselves in the ball pool and then they had a snack.
I went to the cinema with my husband, we watched Han Solo, a film from Star Wars saga.
During the holiday I started watching The Rain serie at Netflix and finally on sunday I enjoyed the cold weather at home.
In english you write 'I' not 'i' even if it is not in the beginning of the sentence.
Sorry I didn't show where you had mistakes, I dont know how to use the text editor
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