Do you like your job? I have been working for 10 years. I graduated from university in 2007. For a years, I was an unemployment. In 2009, I got a job in a hospital as a insurance staf. I just worked f

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Do you like your job? I have been working for 10 years. I graduated from university in 2007. For a years, I was an unemployment. In 2009, I got a job in a hospital as a insurance staf. I just worked for a year here. In the next year, I passed for government employee's test. What a surprise, I work at a hospital again. At first, I didn't know what should I do at my work. The departement of human resource didn't give me a clear task. So, I try so hard to find a way for do something at work. I'm not a person who just come, sit and talk with your co worker without do anything. I was so busy at my previous job. Sometimes I didn't have a time to lunch and took my job to home was not an usual thing again for me. I tried so hard to make my self busy day by day. At last, I did many kinds of jobs and felt so tired. Suddenly, I felt angry because I worked alone and no one's care about my work. Now, I had to find a way again how I could work together with my coworker for a project. It was a challenge for me. At last, I get a promotion at my work and I love it. I enjoy with the responsibilities what I have now. Even the challenge is getting bigger and I have to study a lot because it's a new thing for me. How about you guys? Do you love your job?

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Do you like your job?

I have been working for 10 years. I graduated from university in 2007. For a years, I was an unemployed . In 2009, I got a job in a hospital as an insurance staff member. I just worked for a year here there. In The next year, I passed a government employee's test. What a surprise, I work at a hospital again.

At first, I didn't know what should I to do at my work. The department of human resources didn't give me a clear task. So I tried very hard to find something to do while I was at work. I'm not the type of person who just sits and talks with my coworkers without being productive. I was so busy at my previous job. Sometimes I didn't have a time to eat lunch and took my job to work home which was not an a usual thing again for me.

I tried so hard to make keep myself busy day by day. At last, I did many kinds of jobs and felt so tired. Suddenly, I felt angry because I worked alone and no one cared about my work. I had to find a way again how in which I could work together with my coworker for a project. It was a challenge for me.

At last, I get received a promotion at my work and I love it. I enjoy with the responsibilities what that I have now. Even That being said, the challenges are growing is getting bigger and I have to study a lot because it's a new thing for me my new tasks are unfamiliar to me.

How about you guys? Do you love your job?

Great work Amalya! I restructured a few sentences for you, let me know if you have any questions. I am currently a nanny and can say I do love my job. I have worked many customer service related jobs that were draining and often negatively affected my mood. Spending my days with two young boys who are so excited about every little thing in life is quite refreshing. I am almost always exhausted after a day with them but it definitely has been fun.

Do You Like Your Job?*

I have been working for 10 years. I graduated from university in 2007. For a few years, I was unemployed. In 2009 I got a job in a hospital as a insurance staff member. I only worked there for a year because I passed the government employee's test the following year. Not surprisingly**, I was assigned(?) to another hospital.

At first, I didn't know what I was supposed to do in this position. The Department of Human Resources* didn't give me a clear job description. So, I tried really hard to find ways to contribute something at work. I'm not a person who just*** comes in to sit and talk with coworkers without doing anything. I was so busy at my previous job that sometimes I didn't even have time for lunch. Taking my work home was also not unusual for me then.

I tried so hard to make myself busy day by day, that I eventually wore myself out. I began to feel angry because I worked alone and no one cared about my work (or: no one took any notice of my work). It was difficult to work with my coworkers on group projects after they treated me like that.

At last, I got promoted at work and I love it. I enjoy the new responsibilities I have, even though the increasing challenge of my job means I have to study more.

How about you guys? Do you love your job?

*In titles, all words except some prepositions (4 letter or less) and articles are capitalized. The first and last word is always capitalized. Ex: A Child Found a Cat in Front of the House

**If you were being ironic/funny, use "Not surprisingly,...". If it was truly a surprise, use "To my surprise,..."

***I'm not a person/someone who (just)... is a very common expression for general situations. You used it perfectly here, but the verb is in 3rd person: Someone/a person who comes in...

Congratulations on your promotion :) I'm currently studying to be a bilingual tutor and I love it.

Do you like your job?

I have been working for 10 years. I graduated from university in 2007. For a years, I was an unemployed unemployment. In 2009, I got a job in a hospital as an insurance clerk staf. I just worked for a year there. In the next year, I passed the for government employee's test. What a surprise, I was working at a hospital again.

At first, I didn't know what should I had to do in my job at my work. The departement of human resources didn't give me a clear idea/defined tasks task. So, I tried so hard to find a way to for do something at work. I'm not a person who just arrives come, sits and talks with your co workers without doing anything. I was so busy at my previous job. Sometimes I didn't have a time for to lunch and took taking my work job to home was not an usual thing again for me.

I tried so hard to make myself busy day by day. At last, In the end I did many kinds of jobs and felt so tired. Suddenly, I felt angry because I worked alone and no one's cared about my work. Now, After that I had to find a way again to how I could work together with my coworkers on for a project. It was a challenge for me.

At last, I got a promotion at my work and I love it. I enjoy with the responsibilities that I have now. Even the challenge is getting bigger and I have to study a lot because it's a new thing for me.

How about you guys? Do you love your job?

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