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I am writting in order to apply for the job which was offered I saw advertised in the last Sunday's edition of The Early News.

Having graduated the last year in Communications Engineering, I am currently working for a small company in the town where I was born, located in the South of England. Nevertheless, it would not be an inconvenience for me to move to another place if I was required. The main reason why I would be very pleased to join your company is that I am looking for new challenges which allow me to enhance my skills and grow personally. - I think you need to be more positive here, and focus on what you can offer.  Look at my suggestion below:

Since graduating from university with a 2:1 in Communications Engineering, I have been working for a small company where I have been able to use and develop my proficiency.  Joining your company would allow me to face and deal with new challenges, as well as continue to enhance my skills and grow personally.

While studying at university, I had a part-time job in a shop which helped me pay my tuition and accommodation. Despite the fact that this job was not related to my degree, I had to learn how to be organised enough in order to be able to balance both things.
Furthermore, I can speak French fluently as well as a little Spanish. - again, I think this needs to be more positive:

While studying at university, I had a part-time job in Boots, which helped me pay for my tuition and accommodation.  During the three years with the company I developed many positive attributes, including timekeeping, organisation, team work, and working with the public.  Furthermore, I can also speak French fluently, and Spanish to an intermediate level.

I consider myself as a driven and hardworking person, with good skills for excellent team working skills. I am eager to join a big company like such as yours, which would give me the opportunity to develop my capabilities, and help your company grow.

I can send you any further information that you might require. / Please contact me if you require any further information. / I am happy to provide any additional information.

I am looking look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely, faithfully, - you don't know who you are writing to, so it's faithfully here

I hope you find these suggestions helpful - I have invented a couple of details.  I think you need to be more positive, and be careful with your spelling (writing only has one t) and remember which closing phrase to use.

Best wishes,

Annie