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I want to write an article about one person I had the opportunity to meet in 1998. In this time he wasn’t famous, but today everybody has heard about him. I am talking about Javier Aparicio, who was one of the best teachers in Spain.
He was born in Seville but earlier moved to Madrid, where he lived until his death in 2003. His parents wanted him to become a lawyer like them, but he always had dreamed to be a primary school teacher. His loyalty made him first to study laws, but in his third course he changed and did the exam to get into the Primary’s Teachers Academy. After three years he started to work at the school in Getafe, near to Madrid.
What made him so special? His love for the children and his well-done job. If I had had the chance to study with him I would have studied in the same academy, just to be like him.
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An article
I want to write an article about one a person I had the opportunity to meet in 1998. In At this time he wasn’t famous, but today everybody has heard about of him. I am talking about Javier Aparicio, who was one of the best teachers in Spain.He was born in Seville but earlier later moved to Madrid, where he lived until his death in 2003. His parents wanted him to become a lawyer like them, but he had always had dreamed to be of becoming a primary school teacher. His loyalty made lead him first to study laws at first, but in his third course (year? semester?) he changed (his mind) and did took the exam to get into the Primary’s Teachers Academy Primary (School) Teacher's Academy. After three years he started to work working at the school in Getafe, near to Madrid.
So, What made him so special? His love for the children and his well-done how well he did his job. If I had had the chance, to study with him I would have studied with him in at the same academy, to be just to be like him.
Great work José.. most are suggestions only to sound more natural.
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An article
I want to write an article about one person I had the opportunity to meet in 1998. At this time he wasn’t famous, but today everybody has heard of him. I am talking about Javier Aparicio, who was one of the best teachers in Spain.He was born in Seville but earlier moved to Madrid, where he lived until his death in 2003. His parents wanted him to become a lawyer like them, but he had always dreamed of being a primary school teacher. His loyalty made him first to study law, but in his third course he changed and did the exam to get into the Primary Teachers Academy. After three years he started to work at a school in Getafe, near to Madrid.
What made him so special? His love for the children and how well he did his job. If I had had the chance to study with him I would have studied in the same academy, just to be like him.
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