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Finally summer Yesterday was my last day of exams at school . I am so exitated for my holiday ! I can not wait for the 14th of june ✈ but first I am staing in for more 13 days. I have some plans for my holiday. I am thinking about what flavour of cake I can make next week ( maybe chocolate ). I am going to watch a lot of horror and romantic movies . Me, my mom and my dad are going to the Phoenix park, I will have a lot of fun. I am so excited to meet my friends, we agreed that we are going shopping, going to the cinema and eating some ice cream. I am excited to see my cat as well, and my best friend Isabella. I am bringing a present for her, I think she is gonna like it. Me , my mom, my mom's friend and my friend Livia are going to the aquatic park . I am so excited for everything ! I can not wait anymore .

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                                                                  It's Finally Summer!

Yesterday was my last day of exams at school!  I am so exited to finally be on vacation!  I can't wait for June 14th ✈ Unfortunately, I still have thirteen more days to wait until I can leave.


 I have many plans for my upcoming holiday! In my free time I love to bake cakes!  I am planning the type of cake I will bake next week!  Right now I am thinking of baking a chocolate cake because everyone loves chocolate! I am also going to watch a lot of horror and romantic movies during my summer vacation!  As well, my parents and I are going to Phoenix park which is always a lot of fun! Summer vacation would not be complete without hanging out with my friends!  I know that we will go on shopping trips, see lots of movies and of course eat ice cream!

I am also excited to see my cat and my best friend Isabella! I am bringing Isabella a present!  I know she will love it! . My mom and her friend, as well as my friend Livia, are all going to the aquatic park!. I am so excited for everything! I wish today was June 14th!  I don't want to wait anymore!

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Finally summer

Yesterday was my last day of exams at school . I am so excited for my holiday ! I can not wait for the 14th of june ✈
but first I am staying in for 13 more days. I have some plans for my holiday. I am thinking about what flavor of cake I can make next week ( maybe chocolate ).
I am going to watch a lot of horror and romantic movies . Me, my mom and my dad are going to the Phoenix park, I will have a lot of fun. I am so excited to meet my friends, we agreed that we are going shopping, going to the cinema, and eating some ice cream.
I am excited to see my cat as well, and my best friend Isabella. I am bringing a present for her, I think she is gonna (going to is the formal version of gonna) like it. Me , my mom, my mom's friend and my friend Livia are going to the aquatic park (this is correct but water park is usually used). I am so excited for everything ! I can not wait anymore.

Your summer sounds like it's gonna be fun!

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Finally summer

Yesterday was my last day of exams at school . I am so exitated  excited for about my holiday ! I cannot wait for the 14th of june ✈
but first I am staying in for more 13 more days. I have some plans for my holiday. I am thinking about what flavour of cake I can am going to make next week ( maybe chocolate ).
I am going to watch a lot of horror and romantic movies . Me, my mom and my dad and me are going to the Phoenix park, I will have a lot of fun. I am so excited to meet my friends, we agreed that we are going to go shopping, going to the cinema and to eating some ice cream.
I am excited to see my cat as well, and my best friend Isabella. I am bringing a present for her, I think she is she's gonna like it. Me , my mom, my mom's friend and my friend Livia and me are going to the aquatic park . I am so excited for  about everything ! I really can not wait anymore .


Well done Nicole! I hope you have a great holiday!

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