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"Reasons why I'll choose to major in either architecture or environmetal engineering" Context: I had to write to my professor the reasons that led me to choose those majors Architecture: When in high school, I took subjects related to this major in my first year and I was the mentor of the subject technical drawing during my third year. I am also passionate about how challenging and innovative this field and major are. Environmental Engineering: due to the technical course I took in my high school I have taken subjects related to this major. I understand the relevance of environmental care since I have been observating how big companies in my state deal with environmental issues. Note: I am not sure if I am beig able to explain that I had the subjects of the technical course at the same time I had the regular high school subjects. If I am not being clear enough, can someone help with this part? Thanks in advance!

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"Reasons why I'll choose to major in either architecture or environmetal engineering"

Context: I had to advise my professor by email the reasons that led me to choose those majors

Architecture: When I was in high school, I took subjects related to this major during my first year and mentored the technical drawing subject during my third year. I am also passionate about how challenging and innovative this field and major can be.

Environmental Engineering: due to the technical course I took in my high school, I have taken subjects related to this major. I understand the relevance of environmental care since I have been observing how big companies in my state deal with environmental issues.

Note: I am not sure if I am being able to explain that I had the subjects of the technical course at the same time I studied the regular high school subjects. If I am not being clear enough, can someone help with this part?
Thanks in advance!

Julia, your text was very well written. I simply changed a few words to make it sound more natural. Good luck in you endeavour and if I can help, let me know.

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