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Indian Curry (1)
I usually cook (2) my meals. However, (3) my house owner sometimes cook dinner. I ate some Indian curry yesterday. It was a (4) little (bit) spicy but tasted good. It was actually different from Japanese curry. Japanese curry is creamy but Indian curry is watery. Perhaps flour is not used in Indian curry.Hi Yu,
Do allow me to share some suggestions:
(1) This is the title of your writing. There are different systems for capitalising titles. The first letter of a word is capitalised. Some exceptions include prepositions which do not need to be capitalised. Example: Recipes of Indian Curries
(2) I presume you are referring to your own meals? If so, I took the liberty of changing the phrase to "my meals". By using "the meals", the reader might have the impression that you were cooking "the meals" for someone else.
(3) We use a comma (,) to separate an introductory word or phrase from the rest of the sentence. Examples: However, the curry was not spicy enough. / Unfortunately, the curry was too spicy. / Instead of chilli, I added other spices.
(4) Both "little and "bit" have similar meanings. Hence, you can use either one and still get your meaning across to the reader, unless you are really trying to emphasise how small or insignificant something is.
I hope these help you.
Indian curry
I usually cook the meals myself. However my house owner the owner of the house where I live sometimes cooks dinner. I ate the Indian curry yesterday. It was a little bit spicy but tasted good.Exactly It was different to the one from Japan. Japanese curry is creamy but Indian curry is watery curry. Maybe they don't use flour to make Indian curry maybe don't use the flour.I love Indian curry, but I've never tried the Japanese one!
Indian curry
I usually cook meals by myself, however, my house owner sometimes cooks dinner. I ate Indian curry yesterday. It was a little bit spicy, but tasted good. It's different from Japanese curry which is creamy. Indian curry is thinner; perhaps it doesn't contain flour.Want to progress faster?
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