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The introduction of myself Hi XXX Good to meet you here, my name is Frank who work in an exported company. Our core business is CNC machining and CNC prototype.(detail please have a look our website: www.firstpart.com). As for my job , I think just like a bridge to connect the foreign designer with our engineer. I am a sale and mostly translate the word to both of them. That mean I have to good at English , but the true is not. That is why the reason I want to find a native English to help me to improve this year especially the spoken English. Some time the client call me or have a visit our workshop , when talking with them , I feel nervous and have no idea to talk with them , just want to end the conversation ASAP. When talking with them via email , that allow me having some time to think , check , but meet them face to face, I do not have too much time to think. It is so awkward and need to be solved in the future , or I may be need to worried my position. I hope you can help me to overcome this issue, Mr. XXX Best Regards Frank

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The introduction of myself

Hi XXX
It is good to meet you. My name is Frank. I work in an export company. Our core business is CNC machining and CNC prototype.(For details please have a look at our website: www.firstpart.com). As for my job , I am like a bridge to connect the foreign designer with our engineer. I am in sales and mostly translate the words to both of them. That means I have to be good at English , but the truth is I am not. That is why I want to find a native English speaker to help me to improve this year, especially with speaking English. Sometimes the clients call me or visit our workshop. When talking with them, I feel nervous and have no idea how to talk with them. I just want to end the conversation ASAP. Talking with them via email allows me to have some time to think and check. But meeting them face to face, I do not have too much time to think. It is so awkward and needs to be solved in the future  or I may need to worry about my position.
I hope you can help me to overcome this issue, Mr. XXX

Best Regards
Frank
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Hi Elizabeth,thanks for your suggestion, I will take it in mind
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You seem to have a good idea of what you want to say and the words that you should use. I understood nearly all of what you were trying to say. You should work a little on what form of the words you should use. For example, "meet" should have been "meeting". I am sure that having time to think before you typed did help but the words are in your head. You just need a little confidence and practice hearing/seeing how a native English speaker would say things. The things I corrected with your use of commas( , ) and periods ( . ) are simple things that high school students here in America can't always get right. That, as well, comes from observation and practice.

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