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my day Hi. I started my day at 11 o'clock, it's because in the last night I couldn't sleep. Insomnia became my best friend yesterday. Then... About today: in the morning I helped my mother with domestic things and I also studied. On afternoon I went to the park with 2 friends, by the way they're twins haha. There we talked a lot and breath another air, thank God. But, in a hour, it started to raining and we went to tree down and suddenly appeared a drunk man. We know who he is, but one of us were afraid. It was funny, but when I went talk to him, he started to sing. So we gone have a walk. After this, I came to my home to study more. Now I'm here, writing this. Have a good day/night and thank you for your corrections. Bye.

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my day

Hi.
I started my day at 11 o'clock, it's because in the last night I couldn't sleep. Insomnia became my best friend yesterday. Then Anyway.. About today: in the morning I helped my mother with domestic things (you could say "some chores" instead of "domestic things") and I also studied. On In the afternoon, I went to the park with 2 friends (by the way they're twins haha). There, we talked a lot and breathed some fresh air breath another air, thank God. But, in after an hour, it started to raining and we went to under a tree down and suddenly a drunk man appeared. We know who he is, but one of us were was afraid. It was funny, but when I went to talked to him, he started to sing. So, we gone have went for a walk. After this that, I came to my home to study more. Now I'm here, writing this. Have a good day/night and thank you for your corrections.
Bye.

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