Rainy Days

I have loved rainy days since I was a little girl. I remember looking through the windows and observing how the rain drops made holes on the ground. It was like an enchanting moment to hear the rhythm of the rain on the leaves... Wow! I can picture the whole scene and it comes to my mind in memories of my childhood, life was simple; dreams, hopes and fantasies. It was is interesting to think that at my age of 52, I still remember vividly, particular situations, places, people, even houses' furniture. I can even smell the wet soil...

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Rainy Days

I love rainy days, ever since I was a little girl I can remember looking through the windows and observinge how the rain drops made holes on in the ground. It was like an enchanting moment to hear listening to the rhythm of the raindrops falling on the leaves... Wow! (Wow doesn't suit the style of the sentence your righting here) I can still picture the whole scene and it comes to my brings to mind memories of my childhood when life was simple; dreams, hopes and fantasies... It was is interesting to think (present tense)  that at my age of 52, I can still remember vividly, particular situations, places, people even houses' furniture. I can even smell the wet soil ground... (soil is ok but more likely to say ground) ...