Describe a competition that you took part in.
Thirteen years ago, I was a elementary school student. Then I took part in a baseball taunament. The competitions were held four times in a year. My teammates and I won in Yamagata prefecture taunament. We could go to Tohoku taunament. I was sad loosing there. However we could learn some great points. To prepare the taunament we had to practice 6 days a week and after that I did bat swinging in my backyard. I took care of food as well. I avoided fast food like humbergers and cokacola because they influence us bad things. In stead of them, I ate a lot of rice and various healthy food to make body. Moreover studying baseball was necessary.I needed to know how to hit a ball, how to throw a ball and how to think in many complex situations. In the results, we won the games I believed.I can effort something I want to do now because I knew if I efforted enough, I could acomplish anything. I was so lucky, I could know the importance of effort such young age. I always remember this experience and need to experience successful as soon as possible. Thank you.
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Describe a competition that you took part in.
Thirteen years ago, I was a an elementary school student. Then I took part in a baseball taunament tournament. The competitions were held four times in a year. My teammates and I won in Yamagata prefecture taunament. We could go to Tohoku taunament tournament. I was sad loosing there. However we could learn some great points. To prepare the taunament tournament we had to practice 6 days a week and after that I did bat swinging in my backyard. I took care of food as well. I avoided fast food like humbergers hamburgers and cocacola because they influence infulenced us bad things. In stead of Instead of them, I ate a lot of rice and various healthy food to make body. Moreover studying baseball was necessary.I needed to know how to hit a ball, how to throw a ball and how to think in many complex situations. In the results, we won the games I believed.I can effort something always try my best which I want to do now because I knew if I efforted pushed enough effort , I could acomplish accomplish anything. I was so lucky, I could know the importance of effort such young age. I always remember this experience and need to experience successful as soon as possible. Thank you.0
Thirteen years ago, I was an elementary school student. At that time I took part in a baseball tournament. The competitions were held four times a year. My teammates and I won in the Yamagata prefecture tournament. We then went to the Tohoku tournament. I was sad when we lost there. However, we learned some great lessons. To prepare for the next tournament we had to practice 6 days a week and after that I practiced batting in my backyard. I watched what I ate as well. I avoided fast foods like hamburgers and Coke because they can have a bad influence on our bodies. Instead of fast foods I ate a lot of rice and various healthy foods to make my body strong. Moreover, studying baseball was necessary. I needed to know how to hit a ball, how to throw a ball and how to think in many different situations. In the end, we won the games. After that I knew I could put effort into anything I wanted to do and if I tried hard enough I could accomplish anything. I was so lucky, at that young of an age, to know the importance of effort. I will always remember that experience. Thank you.
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